Worth Having 2/2

[laurent]

title: worth having
rating: r
pairing: siwon/kyuhyun
genre: fantasy, romance
part: 2/2
word count: 4940
summary: it's a different world now and it sucks.

Comments

[hutatsu]

i love your portrayal of kyuhyun in this and the world you created; giving the reader just a glimpse and not the complete story. also the tension in this isn't over done, i enjoyed how you let it seep and then resolve but only a bit before you put more pressure on. there is a simplicity to this and yet there is also a undercurrent of something more concerning them and world they live in...aha i hope this makes sense. i enjoyed the dynamic between kyuhyun and siwon, the part with the bird in the alley is my favorite part; it gives insight into their perceptions and how it affects their interactions. it is very captivating, i thought the second part wasn't completed for a moment and was freaking out a little lol.

thank you for sharing this :)

[laurent]

wow, thanks so much for such a thought out a comment. i'm glad the bird part was your favorite, it was my favorite to write. really thanks for your nice words and feedback. ^^

[catherine_leite]

wonderful piece of work.
i love how you put kyuhyun here.
and i love hat you put a bit vagueness here and there especially in the background story... it kept me wondering

and.
i love you.
this goes to mem.

[laurent]

haha, ahh thanks v much. :)

[wonsu_garkyub]

->Siwon's learned a lot about the other boy without him having spoken a single word. It's amazing what you can learn from someone just by watching.<-

Siwon, so patient when it comes to Kyuhyun but he'd be a fool if he can ignore Kyuhyun for so long, Kyuhyun only ignores because he's afraid Siwon will die in his arms too.

Poor Donghae got left behind for being talkative.

Hope you'll write more WonKyu...this is just wonderful.
glad you made it this long. ^___^

[laurent]

siwon seems to be patient irl with him too so i tried to reflect that aspect. thanks for the feedback. ^^

[ghostdrive]

I really, really like this fic. *___* /incoherent afjlfjad;

[laurent]

Awnn, thanks so much! Im glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting. :)

[wire_dancer]

it is so perfect, I don't even have words to describe it. if you make a sequel, Siwon would thank all the gods, I'm pretty sure

[laurent]

Lol we'll see! Thank you!