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laurent in stilljane

Worth Having 2/2

Sep 25, 2011 16:54

title: worth having
rating: r
pairing: siwon/kyuhyun
genre: fantasy, romance
part: 2/2
word count: 4940
summary: it's a different world now and it sucks.

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* fanfiction, ! kpop

Comments 37

yukahoo September 28 2011, 15:44:14 UTC

I reeeaaally liked reading this. Dystopian AU? My favorite kind...=)

*sigh* It's a nice thought. That there is an other half for everyone. Even the Reaper Boy can find love with a Healer.

I liked how you wrote Kyuhyun. Even though he was hostile and curt, he was still a multilayered person. And Siwon. Poor Siwon. He always puts himself out there without a second thought. He's so open and vulnerable that I feel uncomfortable for him. But I shouldn't because he always gets what he wants in the end.

Good job!

laurent October 3 2011, 21:18:37 UTC

wow, thanks so much for such nice feedback. i'm glad you found kyu as multilayered since i find that one of the most difficult aspects to write in fiction. ^^

rurouneko September 28 2011, 21:31:29 UTC

I like it *_____*
Love how Kyuhyun slowly changed his attitude towards Siwon, of the WonChul background story, and poor little lonely Donghae ;(
I hope you make a continuation or a side story to this hehe

laurent October 3 2011, 21:19:04 UTC

nawwn bb thank you. it means a lot to me that you read and commented. ♥

bl4ckm4lice October 3 2011, 09:03:18 UTC

And you complained how writing a fic is hard :| Because the world you created and the way you described the characters seemed so effortlessly wonderful and heartbreaking at the same time.

I love how patiently Siwon was waiting, but grabbed the chance when he got it because he wanted Kyuhyun that bad. Meanwhile omg Kyuhyun sounds so deliciously desirable, with all those smirk and tight pants and asadafafkl CUTE, OKAY. Shut up, Kyu, you're cute and that's that.

laurent October 3 2011, 21:20:51 UTC

it was very difficult! i'm so glad you think my hard work has something to show for it though. ^^

hehe, i love writing kyu as dark and sexy~ can't help it.

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Re: misskorea said laurent October 5 2011, 00:18:24 UTC

no you love me. idk idk, we'll see! ^^

rossette_uchiha October 6 2011, 21:51:43 UTC

I wanna cry TT^TT and I don't know why... Of course I know, I loved this fic, aww~

laurent October 8 2011, 17:05:35 UTC

awnn, thank you! i'm glad you liked it so much. :')