Fic: we end before we begin

Mar 16, 2010 13:17

Title: we end before we begin
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Rating: G
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 400
Characters: Rose/Ten II
Disclaimer: Anything you recognize? Ain't mine.
Summary: Sometimes love just isn't enough.

A/N: For Challenge 27 at then_theres_us :D

The breeze off the ocean is warm, ruffling the skirt of her white dress and tossing her hair around her head. The sand is soft under her feet as she stands motionless, staring at the water. )

fic: doctor who, fic: character: rose tyler, fic: pairing: rose tyler/ten ii, fic: all fic, fic: challenge fic

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happyfew March 16 2010, 17:23:42 UTC
The wind steals the tears that slip down her cheeks and the bouquet falls from her fingers, landing with a soft whisper on the sand. She reaches up and pulls the veil from her hair, staring down at it and tracing the patterns in the delicate lace with her fingers.

AH, YOU KILL ME. Absolutely beautiful. The symmetry with Doomsday! Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. My heart does hurt slightly, though. ;) ♥♥♥

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stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 17:27:14 UTC
*kisses your heart* All better? XD

Thank you so much, darling <3

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galadriella1 March 16 2010, 17:56:36 UTC
Oh, that was just heartbreaking - so very, very sad.

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stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 17:58:46 UTC
Thank you <3

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klingonlady March 16 2010, 18:25:53 UTC
Those damn beaches!! *cries* Whisper was the right word! This is heartbreakingly beautiful! &hearts&hearts&hearts

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stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 18:29:42 UTC
Thank you so much, bb *cuddles*

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sunnytyler001 March 16 2010, 18:40:54 UTC
Awww. Poor Rose! :(

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stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 18:41:50 UTC
Indeed :( My muse is evil sometimes.

Thank you for reading <3

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teruel_a_witch March 16 2010, 18:49:22 UTC
*Gapes* I...I can't...How could you...why would you...that was just very cruel of you, you know *goes to cry in the corner* You are lucky I love you :P

She opens her hands and watches the wind take the veil from her, watches it float over the waves until it settles into the water.
That is a very beautiful picture,though, as is always your writing *sigh*

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stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 18:53:51 UTC
*cuddles* Thank you, darling <3

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teruel_a_witch March 16 2010, 18:57:12 UTC
*grumpily cuddles back*
Lol, you posted fics in wrong order, you should have put the angsty one before the smutty one XDDD

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stillxmyxheart March 16 2010, 18:59:57 UTC
*snorfle* Well, the smutty one was the first one that popped into my head XD

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