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Oct 06, 2006 08:12

The Kings Consort
conclusion

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clexlover October 7 2006, 00:31:48 UTC

A beautiful conclusion to an exciting and unique fic. You did very well in showing the man that Heph would become as he showcased his many skills - riding, archery, wrestling, swordplay, reading maps, diplomacy, among others, as he too begin to make Alexander's dream his.

The closeness between Heph and Olympias was wonderful to read, as well as his comfortable, friendly relationship with the companions. I like his open honesty and the little talk that he had with Cleitas was quite refreshing. It was nice to see Cleitas give such wise words to Alexander about love and life, and it looks like Alexander listened.

I was pleased that Alexander told Heph how very much he loved him and that he opened his heart and thoughts to him as he discuss matters.

Good that you gave Bolon someone to love...at least he is out of both Heph and Alexander's way.

Well done. Looking forward to your next fic.

Have a great weekend.

stonestepper October 7 2006, 14:50:16 UTC

Thank you. I'm really glad you liked the conclusion. I had to re-write some of it because it had to much horse talk. I thought it might be boring.
Next fic will be soon.

Thanks for the lovely comment.
Wendy

methosdeb October 7 2006, 01:05:27 UTC

wonderful story but I am sorry to see it end .Great sex and a great story all in one -that's hard to come by so I am going to miss this series twice as much .I hope you have another idea in the works -I am going to have withdraws without something to replace this .

stonestepper October 7 2006, 14:52:46 UTC

what a very nice thing to say. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

I have so many stories in my head, my fingers can't keep up. LOL.

The next story will start in a few days. It's an RPS this time.

charisstoma October 7 2006, 04:46:50 UTC

Ach NO. It's done? It can't be done. There's so much story to write/read ...and I haven't stolen um.. rescued Hephaestion yet.

stonestepper October 7 2006, 15:04:50 UTC

It was the kind of story that could have gone on indefinitely. But, I have so many other stories that want to get written, it just had to end.

Don't worry, sweet Hephaestion will be fine.

Enjoyed your FB

cain1999 October 8 2006, 08:22:47 UTC

Sorry to only comment now but I was pretty sick with paranasal sinusitis the last few days and not up to replying to my friends ( ... )

stonestepper October 8 2006, 13:55:54 UTC

That's alright. I am sorry you were not feeling well. I hope you are better now ( ... )

cain1999 October 8 2006, 15:49:14 UTC

I'm feeling better already. Thanks for asking ( ... )

stonestepper October 8 2006, 17:09:05 UTC

Do you think it's true? People can just take your work and put their name to it? How horrible. That's not right. I'll have to look into it. Thanks for telling me.

I'm sorry about your dog. Losing a beloved pet can be incredibly hard.

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suushio October 8 2006, 13:48:44 UTC

I am kind of sad that the story is over, but the end was really great!!
I hope that you start a new story soon. Caus i'm addicted to them.
Hugs,
Susan.

stonestepper October 8 2006, 14:00:47 UTC

Thank you Susan. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I was thinking that people might be getting tired of a younger innocent Hephaestion. It's nice to know that it kept your interest till the end.

A shorter RPS is next and then it's back to Alexander. I think it's going to be a threesome. A/H/B. I've never written that before.

Thanks for reading,
Wendy