Comments | stoopidcrack: Getting it wrong.

stoopidcrack

Getting it wrong.

Sep 17, 2011 01:49

This is my first attempt at an actual real fic, so I'd appreciate feedback of any description.

Pairing: Ryo/Shige
Warnings: none
Rating: PG

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c:koyama keiichiro, c:kato shigeaki, rating:pg, pairing:ryo/shige, c:yamashita tomohisa, c:nishikido ryo, group:news

Comments 6

ryogrande September 17 2011, 06:00:46 UTC

hey! i read this and wanted to leave a comment saying so. ♥ my favorite parts were the descriptions of shige, particularly where he looked like a cat that had just been cleaned. CANNOT UNSEE. also the zombie in the morning reference. very cute. :D

crumplelush September 17 2011, 19:13:05 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

chynn23 September 18 2011, 16:21:36 UTC

oh~ you wrote a fic! <3
I'm going to read it and brb to comment~ :3

crumplelush September 18 2011, 20:35:14 UTC

Cool, I hope you like it. But feel free to tell me if you don't. I like to learn from my mistakes.

sashjun September 18 2011, 20:14:56 UTC

This was immensely cute, I really liked some of Ryo's thought processes and the comparisons you used too. And lol of course Koyama squeals at the end.

♥

crumplelush September 18 2011, 20:34:20 UTC

Thank you! Koyama does enjoy squealing at happy things. And this is a very happy thing. I'm glad you liked it. :)