Color and Light, by qe2

Mar 07, 2010 15:33

Title: Color and Light (with apologies to Stephen Sondheim)
Pairing: RayK/Fraser
Rating: NC-17/M
Prompt: frozen treats
Word count: a bit shy of 3K, but does size really matter?
Summary: Conservation of energy: heat rising fast in my body as the worst of it cools in Ray's.

Color and Light )

fic: due south

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theamusedone March 7 2010, 20:45:47 UTC
Oh my. The sex, while delightfully written and all around wonderful was fun. Then ending however, holy hell. Fantastic.

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qe2 March 8 2010, 01:00:15 UTC
So glad you enjoyed it, darlin'! That means a lot to me. And thanks for commenting early, to ease the writer's anxiety :-).

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ruthless1 March 7 2010, 21:47:19 UTC
Wonderful! Really really wonderful. I could HEAR Ray babbling. And I agree with John - the ending packed a very nice wallop. I feel properly walloped now!

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qe2 March 8 2010, 01:00:57 UTC
Eee! Delighted you liked it - that makes me very happy! Wallopers R Us (consensually, of course...:-)).

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thursdaynext_27 March 7 2010, 21:49:21 UTC
Sweet ending. And the sex and snark are fantastic.

"I'd like to cause my boot upside the head of whatever genius chose the hottest city in Florida for this party and effect some pain on their sorry ass."

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qe2 March 8 2010, 01:01:53 UTC
Heh. Most pleased that all these things worked for you. Ah, Ray, you master of the language,you.

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simplystars March 7 2010, 23:54:45 UTC
Oh yowzers. O_O What a way to warm up winter... that was scorching! :D Your Fraser voice is faboo, and your Ray spot-on with the physicality. I think anyone would want to give cranky!Ray a popsicle and make everything better... :)

And heh, that is one eeeeeeeeeevil prompt. *snicker*

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qe2 March 8 2010, 01:03:59 UTC
Hee! Thanks! I had a winter idea for the prompt as well, but when I started writing the story, this was the story that wanted to be written, so... Pleased that Fraser's voice worked for you.

what? perfectly innocent prompt that! rilly! *blinks owlishly at you*

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akite March 8 2010, 00:02:39 UTC
*fans self* Oh, my! That was hot.

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qe2 March 8 2010, 01:05:23 UTC
Oh, yay. I always know I've gotten it right when I get the stick-people icon from you. Delightful!

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