Color and Light, by qe2

[qe2]

Title: Color and Light (with apologies to Stephen Sondheim)
Pairing: RayK/Fraser
Rating: NC-17/M
Prompt: frozen treats
Word count: a bit shy of 3K, but does size really matter?
Summary: Conservation of energy: heat rising fast in my body as the worst of it cools in Ray's.

Comments

[spuffyduds]

Oh, lovely and hot, and "the tiny flick of invited ache" was so perfect it just made me stop and sigh. Thank you.

[qe2]

Ah, I thought you'd like that line. Written for you, that was.

[spuffyduds]

Awwwww. :-) Will squee in more detail later but am sneakily reading porn at my mother's. *is shifty*

[qe2]

U R. *comments in whispers so as not to alert those in earshot to the goings-on*

[beledibabe]

Oh, bless! I love the sex, but the ending was so absolutely *spot on* emotionally. ::happysigh::

[qe2]

Awesome response, darlin'. I love when people love what I love in what I write. *happysighs back at you*

[mickeymvt]

GUH.

Fraser coming from Ray's voice alone? Hottest thing ever.

And the ending, such emotions and yet, still so THEM.

Love this. Love you for writing this.

[qe2]

First: MICKEY! *glomps you*

Second: Hah. So very pleased this worked for you. I have kind of a thing for Ray talking during sex (I'd have it for Fraser doing so if I could imagine any significant number of circumstances in which he'd actually do it without dying of embarrassment). So, hey, apparently it's write-your-own-kink day chez Q. Hopefully still a valid lifestyle choice.

[mickeymvt]

*glomps back* HIIIIIII!!!

Ray ALWAYS talks, so talking during sex is perfectly normal for him *G*

Totally vaild choice :)

[akamine_chan]

His hair is drenched with sweat at the temples, and his grey t-shirt shows dark patches everywhere: beneath the straps of his holster, its ordinary leather-brown dampened almost to black; under his arms; all along the long line of his spine.

Mmmmmmmmmmm.

Lovely story, Queue. Hot and sexy and sweet and beautiful. Well done.

[qe2]

Delighted it worked for you, my friend. There really is something about hot!Ray that is unexpectedly...well, hot, no?

[luzula]

Mmmmmmmmm. This is just delicious. Ray talking while Fraser sucks him, and then Fraser coming like that, and then Ray coming without a sound. Yum.

[qe2]

Very pleased you enjoyed! I do love the talk/no-talk contrast these men often live out - and the fact that they sometimes switch roles on that front :-).