Comments | stormandwolf: Prophecies of Paradox - Chapter 1: Weave of Dreams (Part 2)

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Prophecies of Paradox - Chapter 1: Weave of Dreams (Part 2)

Dec 19, 2010 00:26

Series: Prophecies of Paradox
Author: stormandwolf
Characters: Ten, Rose Tyler, mention of Nine, a little bit of the TARDIS.
Pairings: Ten/Rose.
Beta: magali29
Rating: Teen (subject to change during the series)
Disclaimer: Doctor Who, Torchwood, and everything else recognizable from the Whoniverse belongs to their respective owners. This is just a fan's attempt to tell ( Read more... )

ten/rose, prophecies of paradox, ten, fanfic, the doctor, doctor/rose, doctor who, rose tyler

Comments 15

magali29 December 20 2010, 12:15:01 UTC

Nice to see this posted. And to see Bad Wolf making a return. It so deserved to be explored more in the show, at least the consequences on Rose.

stormandwolf December 21 2010, 03:16:12 UTC

There's really only one thing I can say, and it's THANK YOU!!! :) Now, to start writing the next one so you don't have to wait a month to proof-read it.

And I do agree, it's sad that there seemed to be no visible consequences in the show of Rose having absorbed the Time Vortex. For me, that immediately makes her more than just another human.

beachy_geek December 21 2010, 02:42:10 UTC

I'm glad to see more of this fic--and thanks for the heads up about this post! I'll friend you back so I can keep track of future chapters--it's going to be interesting (and fun) to see where it all goes!

stormandwolf December 21 2010, 02:58:35 UTC

Glad you like it, and welcome aboard for this ride! :)

kilodalton December 21 2010, 19:21:56 UTC

I can already tell I am going to love this story.

The things I love here:

1) Your evocative descriptive style. I adore it.
2) HE WATCHES HER SLEEP!!!1111 XD XD
3) "He finds himself unable to think of a single reason to leave right now, even though he knows the list truly is a long one."
4) "his lips about to part under hers, only to realize that there was something wrong. Very Wrong. Extremely Wrong. Incredible, cosmically magnitudes of Wrong. Damn Cassandra."

Hee XD

Also, thanks for putting me in the acknowledgments over at Time & Chips -- completely unnecessary! But very nice of you to think to do so =)

stormandwolf December 29 2010, 12:43:02 UTC

Yay! *happydances* I'm very excited to hear that, and I really hope to do justice to all the ideas I have floating around my head, and that you like it enough to keep on reading ( ... )

tasogareban December 21 2010, 20:25:06 UTC

Hee hee hee, I agree with Kilodalton on the list, lol! Especially number three, oh yeah... :D

stormandwolf December 29 2010, 12:48:46 UTC

I'm glad you are liking the story so far. And yes, that particular reason... it really is hard for the Doctor to deny Rose.

*goes to plot more ways to torture the Doctor until he gives in and trashes his silly list* :)

just_a_dram December 23 2010, 02:53:42 UTC

"And Slitheen could not conceivably tap dance. Now, if you had only mentioned a Sontaran marching band..."

Sooo Doctor and sooo funny.

The end part in the Doctor's POV was really fantastic. Really touching and a little sad.

This is my favorite bit:

"The Doctor closes his eyes, not before glancing casually at the oval mirror on the vanity facing the bed, observing the picture they make together, unable to look at it for too long.

It stirs too many things that have been dormant for ages. Things that should remain that way. Better for all involved."

You end on an intriguing bit! Can't wait to see more.

stormandwolf December 29 2010, 12:56:20 UTC

I am glad you liked that line! It made me giggle quite a bit while writing it, wanted to make sure it sounded Doctor-ish enough.

You pointed out another line I like. Ten might put on an act, might even fool others, but in the end, he can't fool himself. He just chooses denial and playing dumb when it suits him.

Hopefully, it won't take me too long to complete it, although next chapter is also going to be a lengthy one.