Fixing Herself...Mostly - Doctor/Donna

[stormypups]

Title: Fixing Herself...Mostly
Author: Stormypups
Pairing: Doctor/Donna
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Length: Approx. 10k
Summary: Mostly humor (I hope) with a smidgen of something similar to romance?
A/N: Special thanks to beatlejessie for fixing my comma abuse and other grammar issues.

Comments

[tkel_paris]

*cacklefit* Go Donna for figuring out a solution on her own! If the Doctor had focused on finding a solution and just forcing the Children of Time home so he could focus harder... Ooh, there's a plot bunny right there!

Ah! And kissing gets involved! Hmm... Working without pulling everything at once. Yay! And man, I think Donna was more interested than she was letting on, but she had to make things tough for the Doctor as payback. ;D

And I loved that she wanted him to tie himself up! Is the TARDIS going to help there? :P And the last paragraph is wonderful! Bravo! :D

[stormypups]

Thank you! It's been on my hard drive forever, I just needed to write the ending. I re-watched their season and got motivated to finish.

And yes, he knew what was going to happen to her, the other kids could have waited while he sorted out Donna first!! Instead I bawled my eyes out.

Babbling now. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[tkel_paris]

And yes, he knew what was going to happen to her, the other kids could have waited while he sorted out Donna first!!

Well, maybe he had to get Rose away, but the focus on Donna would've driven Handy to insist on staying to contribute. I really hated his fate... Anyway, that detail was part of what drove me to choose the song I did for Eleven and Donna's confrontation in my five-part song-fic series "You Thought Wrong." I used only Kelly Clarkson songs, and chose for the part with said confrontation "Never Again." A good angry break-up song. Feel free to check out the story, if you don't mind songfics.

Great story, BTW. If I didn't already say so. :D

[stormypups]

I enjoy song fics, so I'll check it out. I find I can't read fics when I'm writing them. And I'd love to see interaction between Donna and Eleven! I'll definitely check it out! And thank you, I'm really glad someone besides me and my Beta liked it lol.

[sdrana]

Donna Noble, you dirty determined woman, you.

This made me grin so hard. Good writing!

[stormypups]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[librarygeekgirl]

Hey can you do a follow up of when she gets back... I REALLY want to read that, is it bad?

[stormypups]

The idea is very much stuck in my head, so it is possible, yes. So no, it's not bad! LOL

[librarygeekgirl]

PLEASE!
*BEGS AND PLEEDS*

A long, R rated story.... yes ok.... I will stop now lol.

I just have this running through my head.

[katherine_b]

Hee, smut and gorgeousness! I adore so much about this! The kisses are lovely, what happens next is even better, and the way it's all hidden (at first) as being a cure for Donna is always worth a knowing wink and a nod. Of course, the ending where they finally give in to the urges and just let themselves enjoy it is the best part! Love it!

[stormypups]

What an appropriate icon!!!

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[doctorsgirl26]

HAHAHAHAHA! "Come on Spaceman, give us a mind shag!" Brilliant! Donna is one determined woman!

[stormypups]

She knows he's hiding the good stuff from her!!

Thank you :)