Now What? ~ Chapter Ten ~ Final Chapter ~ ''Darkness & Light''

Sep 14, 2010 19:35

After some time, the door opened, and I heard footsteps before something hit the floor and the person who came runned to me.
''Alice? Alice! Alice?!''
I could hear Eric's panicked voice echoing in the hallway but it seemed so distant. He grabbed my left arm and shooked it slightly, but since I didn't show any signs of life he pressed two of his ( Read more... )

now what?

Leave a comment

Comments 24

gem_gemmy September 14 2010, 17:56:20 UTC
Awesome final chapter, but I can't believe its over! D:

I just knew it was Matt in that Elevator! :D I'm glad Alice got her happy ending with him.

Reply

storyteller1010 September 14 2010, 18:57:07 UTC
Thanks!

I know! I actually shed a tear when I posted the entry. No joke. I'm gonna miss Alice. :(

I think we all knew, lol, I actually thought about making up another boy so it wouldn't be him, but then I said to myself "Who are you kidding? That's Matt in that elevator. You know it. Everyone knows it. Deal with it." :D

I'm glad too. She deserves it; I think we can all agree on that one. ^^

By the way, thanks for supporting and commeting my story, your opinion really does matter to me and I think your story is amazing. Hopefully, I'll read it for the time to come. :)

Reply

gem_gemmy September 14 2010, 19:10:57 UTC
I know how you feel! I have other stories on other sites, and everytime I finish one I feel sad.

No problem, I've enjoyed reading this story and commenting on it! And normally I'm really not a good commenter, at all. :D

Reply


anonymous September 14 2010, 18:26:47 UTC
Awesome ending, loved your whole story, glad you are back in the internet world with us, hope you are enjoying your windows 7, and I'm really glad you feel happy!!!!!

Sorry if this doesn't make sense, but I'm writing this hidden from the professor in my computer class. I just got the notification on my cellphone that you had posted something and I had to read and comment.

I'm really hoping you will keep on writing, 'cause girl you got lots of talent, and you really know how to use it.

I'm really glad Alice and Matt, finally got together, and trust me falling in love with someone you have never met but you have talked to dozen of times, is not hard. I've been there.

Once again I'm really glad you are happy and I hope to hear more from you in the near future!!!

Reply

storyteller1010 September 14 2010, 19:09:53 UTC
Thanks!

I didn't get Windows 7 after all. Oh, well. Windows XP still rocks!

Haha, well, it does make sense, and I'm honored you're typing this while hiding from the teacher. Not many people would read and comment while on class. :D

Oh, wow, thank you! I will keep on writing. It's my "thing". You can bet that if I'm not watching TV or not doing something on the PC, that my nose is buried in a book or that I'm typing/writing something up. Best. Hobbies. Ever. (;

I'm glad too. And, yes, I know that; been there, done that. :P

I think it's obvious I'll NEVER leave LJ so you can always talk to me, and I'll reply or count that I'll write entries. I mean, look at me. I even found a way to be on it when my lap top wasn't here. Obssesed much, lol.

Reply

marijuly12 September 14 2010, 21:40:22 UTC
Oh Crap!!!!! For some reason my comment was posted in an anonymous way!!!! And Trust me these stories are by far more importantly than the class... I'm amused by the fact that you are one of my only friends (if I have the honor to call you that) that uses Windows XP, and likes it ( ... )

Reply

storyteller1010 September 15 2010, 07:14:33 UTC
Oh, so that was you ( ... )

Reply


alexavo_thesims September 14 2010, 20:09:30 UTC
That was an awesome final chapter!

Matt's side of it was so cute, I'm so glad it was a happy ending :)

I think either ending would of been really interesting :D But this is probably the one more people would enjoy XD

I really hope your doing another story! Please do :)

Reply

storyteller1010 September 15 2010, 07:21:42 UTC
Thanks!

Yup, me too. :P

Yeah, I think Blair thought like that too. I'm just happy she said something to me, otherwise my readers would kill me! XD

Of course I'm doing another story. There's no such thing as a storyteller who has only one story! (;

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

storyteller1010 September 15 2010, 07:23:03 UTC
Thanks!

Hehe. :P

Really?! =O I thought everyone guessed that one, lol. Doesn't matter, though, it was more intense for you since you didn't knew! :D

Reply

storyteller1010 September 15 2010, 07:24:12 UTC
By the way, I owe you a huge thank you since you were the first to read and comment my story. It really kept me going. So, yeah. THANKS! (:

Reply


Loved It! anonymous September 15 2010, 00:42:55 UTC
Awww! :D I loved the ending and I'm so glad you didn't kill Alice! I wish people would comment on my stories! I'm putting up the 3rd chapter of Life Goes On up sometime tonight so look out for it! :D
Hallio-
http://halliosimstories.blogspot.com/

Reply

Re: Loved It! storyteller1010 September 15 2010, 07:25:32 UTC
Thanks, and I'm glad too!

About the more readers... Do you want me to put you in my links?

Reply


Leave a comment

Up