You know the drill~ Comments, critique... ESPECIALLY CRITIQUE. This guy's one of my tougher muses to write for. I need some feedback!

Title: Sleepless
Author: ”genaleah”
Fandom: Toy Story 3
Characters: Chuckles, Dolly, other Bonnie Toys
Prompt: 1. Sleep
Word Count: 1019
Rating: K
Summary: The first night under new ownership, and Chuckles has a lot on his mind.
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I don’t own Toy Story or any of it’s characters, Disney and Pixar do. This is just for fun.

( So tired but you just can't sleep )

( Scene Prompts )

❦ basics
name: Lotso-Huggins-Bear
age: 27
Gender: Male
Movie/series: Toy Story 3
year or position: Leadership skills teacher
Non-Speaking Animal Companion(if any): none
Powers(if any): Persuasion, power, and acting

❦ In depth:
Personality: Lotso is extremely two-faced. He can either be warm and welcoming, or cold and heartless.
On the positive side ( Read more... )