Flash! Bam! Alakazam!

[strickenwings]

Title: Flash! Bam! Alakazam!
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brian/Matt
Summary: This one might be heaven-sent, Matt, so don't screw it up!
Disclaimer: The only thing here that is mine is the plot. I do not intend to besmirch any actual people, whom I also don't own. The title belongs to Nat King Cole from "Orange Colored Sky."

Comments

[thursdaywench]

HAHA nice last line.

the awkwardness in the beginning was kind of adorable, but the fooling around was hotx200. :D

the image of the two of them on a twin bed is HILARIOUS.
alright, MORE!

[strickenwings]

More will come, I'm just being a tease. I'm considering speeding up the entries, but I'm not sure.

I do pride myself in that last line.

Thanks!

[sevenfoldbaby]

hehe...I'm loving this, Brian is sweet, caring, and funny, I'm happy to see Matt relaxing and enjoying life, can't wait to read more

[strickenwings]

Thank you. :D

[adora68]

Just when I think I can't love this story any more, you make me love it more. I have the biggest, goofiest grin on my face after reading this chapter. =D

Brian is pretty much perfect -- from making breakfast to pouncing on Matt on the couch! And I adore how Matt is opening up. Realizing that he's falling for Brian because the couch he's buying isn't nice enough for him is one of the sweetest little details I've ever read.

I'm hoping that being happier in his personal life will help Matt at work, too. It's funny how often that works. Well, either that or it will completely destroy his career. *shrugs* Whichever happens, he'll still be better off.

[strickenwings]

Perfection, eh...?

Muahahaha.

xo

[adora68]

Oh no! Don't you give me that evil laugh!! If Nice!Brian is replaced by Bad!Brian, I will be a very, very unhappy girl! In fact, I would go so far as to say that I will be quite put out. *nods*

I also wanted to say that, contrary to your Author Note, I don't think this is terribly similar to other stories I'm reading lately. There's been lots of Teasing!Brian and some Nice!Brian, but I don't think I've seen one as carefree yet industrious as yours. It's a lovely combination. And your Matt, the lonely, single, workaholic Matt, is completely original.

[zuzi82]

Wow...this was intense, and beautiful and real, and all sorts of pretty.

I feel like quoting.

""No pro-" he was cut off by a kiss. It was dry, warm, rough, and heaven."

"From there, it escalated into heated caresses and then rough, hungry - Oh GOD - grinding, thumping bodies and mouths. Matt was convinced he had gone from solid matter to pure heat and energy."

These two sentences gave me goosebumps.

[strickenwings]

Then my work is almost complete. >:]

[nevrlivedinfear]

finally theyre really getting somewhere.

[strickenwings]

Yes. I thought it was probably time. I didn't want to draw it out too much.

thanks <3