Called out!! On the other site where I posted this, I tried to apologize for the end. Honestly this was just written for practice and at the end, I'd kind of lost steam? But there might be a sequelish fic.. maybe that can make up for fail end.
Minho's sin is wrath. (I feel like fail again because on the other site I posted chapter titles, and the last chapter being called wrath it was kind of.. okay whatever LOL) I have a problem with meek bunny Onew, so..
I'm getting all rambly. Thanks so much. Amazing comment. *_* made my morning bright~ herp~
wow that was really good. however I'm kinda confused about the ending tbh. couldn't really figure Minho's sin... and even now that I know it... I'm still confused. I hope for a sequel where you would explain the ending. Or you could pm me or write in the comments lol I'm really curious and I'm even having a debate with my friend over it XD
btw I feel kinda rickrolled since I thought it's gonna be jongyu and it was more of a jongho fic (I'm a big jongyu shipper lol), but that's ok^^ Nevertheless I really enjoyed it, thank you for sharing :D
Uh, tbh I really regret posting the ending this way. It's true I was having problems and stuff but I should have just waited until my head cleared. Whatevs whatevs.
The end: Minho killed Jonghyun, who had been raping him. He was "blinded by wrath", as Jonghyun had been "blinded by lust". They were both tricked by Onew, so that Onew could own both of their souls. (In the end, btw, Onew did own both of their souls, but that isn't really elaborated upon here.)
This is just out of curiosity and has nothing to do with your comment or this story: When you read Jongyu, do you prefer one or the other on top?
No need regretting, it's really good, but it requires some thinking from the readers lol
ok, i get it now :D the key-word that made me so confused was 'shaking' since I thought he didn't do it of his own accord which was kinda right, but then I blamed Onew...... tbh now that I understand the ending this fic seems even more amazing :D thanks for explaining^^
...uhm it doesn't matter? as long as it's Jongyu I'm fine with it :D it depends how the author portrays them. even if it doesn't matter who tops, if for example someone wrote that Onew's a really shy guy (and there wouldn't be any twist that he likes to be possessive of Jjong or something) and made him top, I'd furrow my brows, but read it anyway lol
I see I see! Sorry to bother you with the question, just a curious thing of mine. ♥ I love Jongyu too, btw. (Well obviously, I wrote it here, even if it is more Jongho-ish.)
WHYA RE YOU APOLOGIZING OMG NO THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL OK
this was wonderful and im in tears cuz loved it so so much and it has onjongho. all 3 of them and so it makes it even better and dear me, i am bad at commenting i cant even write pretty sentences im sorry but
DONT U DARE omg why would you!!!! it was great. lovely. mind boggling to say the least but quite a fantastic read. i feel dumb for not figuring out the vices but sjfbekjff ...will you have more of this kind of fic?
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Minho's sin is wrath. (I feel like fail again because on the other site I posted chapter titles, and the last chapter being called wrath it was kind of.. okay whatever LOL) I have a problem with meek bunny Onew, so..
I'm getting all rambly. Thanks so much. Amazing comment. *_* made my morning bright~ herp~
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however I'm kinda confused about the ending tbh. couldn't really figure Minho's sin... and even now that I know it... I'm still confused.
I hope for a sequel where you would explain the ending. Or you could pm me or write in the comments lol
I'm really curious and I'm even having a debate with my friend over it XD
btw I feel kinda rickrolled since I thought it's gonna be jongyu and it was more of a jongho fic (I'm a big jongyu shipper lol), but that's ok^^
Nevertheless I really enjoyed it, thank you for sharing :D
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Uh, tbh I really regret posting the ending this way. It's true I was having problems and stuff but I should have just waited until my head cleared. Whatevs whatevs.
The end: Minho killed Jonghyun, who had been raping him. He was "blinded by wrath", as Jonghyun had been "blinded by lust". They were both tricked by Onew, so that Onew could own both of their souls. (In the end, btw, Onew did own both of their souls, but that isn't really elaborated upon here.)
This is just out of curiosity and has nothing to do with your comment or this story: When you read Jongyu, do you prefer one or the other on top?
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ok, i get it now :D the key-word that made me so confused was 'shaking' since I thought he didn't do it of his own accord which was kinda right, but then I blamed Onew......
tbh now that I understand the ending this fic seems even more amazing :D thanks for explaining^^
...uhm it doesn't matter? as long as it's Jongyu I'm fine with it :D
it depends how the author portrays them. even if it doesn't matter who tops, if for example someone wrote that Onew's a really shy guy (and there wouldn't be any twist that he likes to be possessive of Jjong or something) and made him top, I'd furrow my brows, but read it anyway lol
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its 4am. i shall comment properly and coherently after sleep
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THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL OK
this was wonderful and im in tears cuz loved it so so much and it has onjongho. all 3 of them and so
it makes it even better and
dear me, i am bad at commenting i cant even write pretty sentences im sorry but
I HAVE MANY GOOD FEELINGS FOR THIS FIC.
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it was great. lovely. mind boggling to say the least but quite a fantastic read. i feel
dumb for not figuring out the vices but sjfbekjff ...will you have more of this kind of fic?
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