I am commenting cause im georgie and i wish to comment! haha poem time:: This flower grew from a tiny seed With the help of the rain and sun It grew into a magnificent beauty Shining in the eyes of others, Letting people and flowers alike stare upon it daily No one thought this flower could die, It was the perfect flower It wouldn’t go down that path That path of disappointment. But when the beauty fails to live up to its standards No one looks at it anymore, It has failed Mother Nature Why should anybody care? The petals of this once gorgeous flower die Its colors slowly fade away. People may start looking again, They may be concerned But that flowers petals will never be the same, No matter how people try and help it. That flower had disappointed, And in return, the flower had lost its petals
ok so give ita rating babe i love you and ill miss you so much!
omg i cant believe you wrote that! dude our poetry skills go wayyy back to derek! hahaha good times.. its amazing you know that! perfect ten.. gold medal and really i mean that. ~elise
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poem time::
This flower grew from a tiny seed
With the help of the rain and sun
It grew into a magnificent beauty
Shining in the eyes of others,
Letting people and flowers alike stare upon it daily
No one thought this flower could die,
It was the perfect flower
It wouldn’t go down that path
That path of disappointment.
But when the beauty fails to live up to its standards
No one looks at it anymore,
It has failed Mother Nature
Why should anybody care?
The petals of this once gorgeous flower die
Its colors slowly fade away.
People may start looking again,
They may be concerned
But that flowers petals will never be the same,
No matter how people try and help it.
That flower had disappointed,
And in return, the flower had lost its petals
ok so give ita rating babe
i love you and ill miss you so much!
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~elise
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~ <3 me
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