Damage Control (twins PG-13)

[strssna]

Title: Damage Control
Pairing(s): Bill/Tom
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: As real as some pictures.
Warnings: Twincest, angst, fluff
Summary: Suspicions are bad, fighting against them is hard. Same goes for insecurities.
Author's notes: Of course I would have a different view on the Chantelle thing. This story is for anyone to anyone who has

Comments

[rikke_leonhart]

Ouch my heart.
You write the inescurity perfectly, it feels as if I'm sitting right there, looking at Bill and feeling all he's felling in that dark and empty room.
Those passages felt like a movie to me, you know, the camera zooming in on the candle, then on Bill's expressions and then to the entire room.
I really like how you used the rain as apparent tear drops on the window. Rain can mean so many things, it's so amazing that it can be interpreted in so many ways.

The flow of the last conversation is really good and it's just so heartbreaking.

You know I adore your writing <3

[strssna]

Oh dear, my head just grew too big to fit Europe.
I really don't know what to say, your review was pure gold and I feel so thankful for your words ♥

And funnily enough, as we share the love for rain, it was raining the whole time I wrote this and it just fit perfectly.

[jellypencil]

I really like this, it seems a bit surreal and quiet, and the writing is so beautiful. The candle and the clock ticking - and Tom listening to Bill's heart beat, that was so sweet. ♥

They really are perfect for each other. ♥

[strssna]

They really are, as perfect as your icon ♥
I hope you know how much I appreciate your reviews, you always find exactly the words to make me so thankful.

[jellypencil]

I enjoy your stories so much, the least I can do is review! <333

[subtlemagic]

The first bit is the kind of way people react when their in a bad break up, and it just broke my heart to see Bill feel like that compleately unnecessarily. Damn Jost sometimes.

Tomi will always come back to make it better though.

[strssna]

Damn Jost indeed. Luckily Tom is always (almost, except when he's posing for PR) there to reassure him.
Thanks for your sweet words <3

[aaliyah_babygul]

Honey, even though I'm trying to be out of fandom for awhile you touched my heart with your beautiful one shot. Girls on our Russian forum think it's just PR, nothing more, so... I really enjoyed reading Bill's emotions and suspicions. He was so nervous and I kinda felt it. Realistic. I guess it's exactly what I needed! Perfect.
ILU <3

[strssna]

One just can't resist the twin love :) I'm glad I could lure you back for a while. I think it's PR really, the pictures and all that.

I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed this ♥

[ma_chelle]

Reading this made my heart ache--you always seem to know just how to do that. <3

[strssna]

Ouch - sorry about that :) It's a bit unfair, really, as all your reviews always make my heart swell.

[ma_chelle]

Ahh...but it's the best kind of ache. ♥

[strssna]

♥
There's a part of me, a naughty part, that wonders if Bill agrees or whether he thinks there's better sorts of aches. Ha. Ha.