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Jan 12, 2007 17:30

Title: Consequences, part 8
Author: studyingstones2
Pairing: Seto/Mokuba, Seto/Yuugi, Yuugi/Mokuba
Rating: R overall
Summary: 376 words.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Previous parts live in tags and memories.

( Part 8 )

consequences, drabbles, seto/mokuba, seto/yuugi, yuugi/mokuba

Comments 8

praiseofshadows January 13 2007, 03:58:28 UTC

Yay, yay, yay! =D

studyingstones2 January 13 2007, 22:23:15 UTC

yma2 January 13 2007, 04:15:10 UTC

Nice. Is that the end? It feels like it could almost BE the end. BTW, I love the turn of phrase you use with 'Kaiba's body looked unslept in." Nice.
I would like to leave a longer review, but I NEED sleep.

studyingstones2 January 13 2007, 22:25:35 UTC

Actually, I considered having this be the end of Consequences and then having the next part be the start of a sequel.

But no, this isn't the end. There're still at least three or four parts in my brain that need to be written before this can be called over. *nods*

lady_nuriko January 13 2007, 06:22:27 UTC

“Welcome back, Kaiba. Welcome home.”

Something about the tone of that line bodes very badly for Kaiba-kun.

studyingstones2 January 13 2007, 22:27:10 UTC

XD We'll just have to see, won't we?

cody_thomas March 5 2007, 11:35:14 UTC

If I could have seen the look on Yugi's face I could better judge if that was said warmly, or with deadly ice.

studyingstones2 March 7 2007, 02:28:59 UTC

Neither. More uncertain without really showing it (because so much has changed and what if everything explodes in a painful, pretty shower of sparks now that Kaiba's added himself back into the equation), glad but wary.