My Secret Girl (Part 2)

May 04, 2009 02:29

Title: My Secret Girl (Part 2/4)
Author: stupeur
Editor: cranperryjuice
Rating: R for sexuality, language, statutory rape.
Pairing: Miya (MUCC) x Younha (Korean singer and actress)
Summary: When Miya decides to help a young, promising singer set foot in the music industry, he has no idea how seriously she will take his offer.
Previous part: 1
Notes: Finally some drama ( Read more... )

artist: younha, title: my secret girl, artist: mucc

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thaliane May 10 2009, 18:22:26 UTC
when it turned out to be a dream I was like "woah *surprised face* lol". But the date-thing ice-cream thing was real, right? (or as real a fanfiction gets :P)

i still like the story btw :) gonna read part 3 as soon as I can ^^

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stupeur May 10 2009, 19:30:22 UTC
Hee. XD Yes, the date actually happened, but not the sexing up after. :P Miya is a perv.

Thank you. :3 I hope part 3 doesn't disappoint you! >_

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hanako October 11 2009, 03:46:34 UTC
He also wanted Younha to either magically grow a couple of years older or stop finding ways to look prettier, or soon he'd have to be cuffed to the kitchen table.

hahaha my favourite line, hands down. ahhh this part was so cute, the kiss made me squeal, no joke! *blushes* but i was really taken aback by the sex scene haha. honestly i was a bit relieved because i'm not ready for this yet! hahaha! but i really like the flow of things so far, seamless but no lingering. that way there's no cheesiness, just realness. (i sound like a bad jpop song)

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stupeur October 11 2009, 03:50:08 UTC
Hahahahaha I'm sorry. :'D I can't remember why I thought it was a good idea to throw that in, but I still find it hilarious. Part 3 gets cheesier, though, but it has ~plot twists~.

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stupeur January 6 2010, 06:50:12 UTC
Bahaha I'm sorry. ♥ They more than make up for it soon after, I promise.

I love writing Yukke as Miya's BFF, but yes, they could make a sickeningly cute pairing. XD I hope you're going to write that idea you had. :Db

I'm so sorry for treating Tatsurou so badly in this story. I swear I really do love him. ♥ For the record, I don't actually believe he's either a womanizer or a drunk lol. And yes, Miya wrote Bouzenjishitsu about him because he was pissed off at him, but it was never clear why. I don't want to think about them breaking up either, I love them way too much for that. :'( I think I'd cry forever lol. (And you got to see them? Was it at RTOC?)

And urg, I hope work wasn't too awful. I have school early-ish tomorrow and I still can't leave the computer even though it's almost 2 in the morning, so... I definitely know where you're coming from. XD,

Anyway, thank you for your kind comments, as always. :3 They're really inspiring me to write more! Now if only school wasn't so time-consuming...

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stupeur January 13 2010, 19:37:45 UTC
But Tatsurou is REALLY charismatic, too... I think he could cause some pretty serious damage if he wanted to. XD

Awwwe, no, I definitely understand! I'm really glad you had a good time. :D

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