Fic: Ultimate Ninja Technique

Jul 14, 2008 10:47

Prompt: How to open a champagne bottle with a sword.
Title: Ultimate Ninja Technique
Fandom: Nabari no Ou
Genre: crack
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1300
Summary: The drunken revelry of the Kairoushuu.

spoilers through episode 14/manga volume 7 )

prompt:43 how to open a champagne bottle

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jayskittles July 14 2008, 21:36:08 UTC
pfft. that was amazingly cute. the crown was just the icing on the cake, too.

(didn't Raikou leave kurogamon in that flower bed after he sliced gau up though? I could be wrong.)

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kannnichtfranz July 14 2008, 21:49:13 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it. :D

I'm not 100% sure, but what I thought happened was that Raikou had Shirogamon at first, and Raimei had Kurogamon. Then, when Raikou left a sword in the field for Raimei, he gave her Shirogamon and kept Kurogamon. I thought that was really touching, so I hope that's what he did.

*attempts to look it up* I think that looks like Shirogamon in the last screencap...
http://randomc.animeblogger.net/2008/06/16/nabari-no-ou-11/

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sunna_sol July 15 2008, 16:10:29 UTC
though short, you managed to capture all essences of Yoite/Miharu goodies :b And Raikou was as funny as eva :3

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kannnichtfranz July 15 2008, 19:55:42 UTC
Yoite and Miharu are so cute! They are irresistible. I'm glad you liked this, thank you for commenting! :D

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stearicacid July 16 2008, 00:54:16 UTC
It's so nice to find something written for this itsy bitsy fandom, especially something that has RaikouGau.

I love how you really captured the 'stupid boys' part of their interactions.

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kannnichtfranz July 16 2008, 03:56:17 UTC
Hee! I just came from the Darker Than Black fandom, which is even itsy-bitsier. The NnO comm already has 1000 members, and to me the fandom seems to inspire fanworks more than DTB did. So I have some hope for this fandom. :)

I love the Kairoushuu guys, all of them! I'm glad you enjoyed the silly boys, thank you for commenting! :D

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stearicacid July 17 2008, 16:15:32 UTC
I remember just trying to find some Darker than Black icons a while ago, and it seemed impossible. Though I've been watching/reading things with really small fandoms lately, I haven't actually begun to participate in any of them until now. I've actually already been inspired to write one or two things for NnO, too.

I love Kairooshuu! At first I thought "BOO bad guys" but just a short while later I loved them.

You're welcome.

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kannnichtfranz July 17 2008, 18:18:26 UTC
Oh, there were a ton of DTB icons posted to the darker_than comm. A friend of mine made beautiful ones, which you can find here if you want to see. :) There was never much fic, though.

The only bad guys in NnO seem to be the leaders -- of both sides, kind of. I'm not a big fan of Fuuma or Hattori. The Kairoushuu guys seem to be idealists. I'm not sure about the Fuuma guys; Fuuma himself is too hard to pin down.

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UH tohru_kyo July 16 2008, 06:10:09 UTC
Wow, i liked this a lot!. BTW, doesn't raimei have kurogamon? I thought Raikou had shirogamon.

""Brother! What do you think you are doing?" Kazeho exclaimed, as Yukimi laughed and pulled his gun. He aimed at the top of the bottle, squinted one eye shut, and fired."

In that part, you spelled kazuho's name incorrectly.

Just saying.

Otherwise, this is a great fic!

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Re: UH kannnichtfranz July 16 2008, 06:24:19 UTC
I'm glad you liked! I'm not 100% sure, but what I thought happened was that Raikou had Shirogamon at first, and Raimei had Kurogamon. Then, when Raikou left a sword in the field for Raimei, he switched them and gave her Shirogamon and kept Kurogamon. I thought that was really touching, so I hope that's what he did.

Thank you so much for pointing out the typo! *goes off to fix*

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Re: UH tohru_kyo July 16 2008, 06:57:22 UTC
Waitwaitwait, so they switched? I think i need to re-watch the series over again to see how much i missed. But i had no idea about the white/black gamon thing, thanks!

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Re: UH kannnichtfranz July 16 2008, 17:46:48 UTC
You're welcome! I really like series where the deeper you look into them, the more depth you find. :3

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