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It's an interesting start, I'll give you that much. And I'm looking forward to reading more. I was unsure of the start (I usually am when OC's are brought into fic) but the way you wrote this Lexy character and subsequently killed her off in the same chapter has somewhat endeared her to me. Pity for Draco, but I can see this one traumatic episode affecting him and (hopefully) changing the way he has viewed things all his life, especially if this is to be H/D... unless you plan on making Harry turn to the dark side, which I seriously doubt ;) lol. (but would not be adverse to!)
It's nice to see Lucius and Narcissa in this fic, the Malfoys are definitely my favourite family, and it's good to see them being portrayed as something resembling human beings as opposed to cold-blooded, emotionless, self-absorbed aristocrats (not that there is anything wrong with that mind.)
Good luck with writing more. And a Happy New Yr to you! Peace, CS WhiteWolf
P>S> I liked the mention of Bon Jovi- most amusing!
Thank you! I'm glad you'd keep reading this fic, even though the beginning is a bit fucked up. I was a bit hesitant about including the OC at first because I'm not too fond of them either but I'm so pleased you think she's an ok plot device.
Omg I love the Malfoys too and I hate the way everyone always portrays them as evil, impersonal creatures that are impossible to like or empathize with. Yay! There's someone who shares my views! Fab.
Thanks so much for reviewing, your thoughts are always valued.
Happy New Year,
love
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P.S I am a HUGE Bon Jovi fan and had to work him in somewhere!
I was just minding my own buisness, reading along, happily lost in your little swirling malestrom of text and then BAM!!! ITS OVER!!! What do you want from me? Must I BLEED??? ARG your damn prologue has got me antsy.
Fantabulous!abundantfearJanuary 3 2005, 07:06:30 UTC
Why did you wait so long to release this baby?! It was fantastic! I was like, on the edge of my seat the whole time! And of course, Draco was lovely! I'm already curious as all hell and am going through all the possible scenario's ... thank God it's the holidays! I would be so fucked otherwise. Now it's just a matter of getting it all out before the 6th book comes out and everything changes, eh? Oh, it was terrific! You remain Slash Queen!
Re: Fantabulous!stylophileJanuary 10 2005, 17:54:38 UTC
I know! It's been a whole year! I can't believe it. I feel old. Wah.
I am SO glad you liked it because there are several people on my flist whose comments are like the definitive opinions of a story and unsurprisingly you're one of them because you're fab.
There's about 7 more chapters finished, I think so there'll be more soon!
Slash Queen? Me? *boogies around bedroom with delight*
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I love the way you protray Draco's rebellion and questioning of his beliefs.
Please continue!
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Thanks for revieiwng!
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It's nice to see Lucius and Narcissa in this fic, the Malfoys are definitely my favourite family, and it's good to see them being portrayed as something resembling human beings as opposed to cold-blooded, emotionless, self-absorbed aristocrats (not that there is anything wrong with that mind.)
Good luck with writing more. And a Happy New Yr to you!
Peace,
CS WhiteWolf
P>S> I liked the mention of Bon Jovi- most amusing!
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Omg I love the Malfoys too and I hate the way everyone always portrays them as evil, impersonal creatures that are impossible to like or empathize with. Yay! There's someone who shares my views! Fab.
Thanks so much for reviewing, your thoughts are always valued.
Happy New Year,
love
x x x
P.S I am a HUGE Bon Jovi fan and had to work him in somewhere!
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I was just minding my own buisness, reading along, happily lost in your little swirling malestrom of text and then BAM!!! ITS OVER!!! What do you want from me? Must I BLEED??? ARG your damn prologue has got me antsy.
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Write more cuz we love you and stuff
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swirling malestrom of text
That is the nicest, most bizarre comment I've ever had! *blushes* You guys are too sweet to me.
Don't bleed! Blood outside of the body is bad unless it is being used in kinky sex.
Next chapter will be up very soon!
love you too x x x
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It was fantastic! I was like, on the edge of my seat the whole time! And of course, Draco was lovely! I'm already curious as all hell and am going through all the possible scenario's ... thank God it's the holidays! I would be so fucked otherwise.
Now it's just a matter of getting it all out before the 6th book comes out and everything changes, eh?
Oh, it was terrific! You remain Slash Queen!
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I am SO glad you liked it because there are several people on my flist whose comments are like the definitive opinions of a story and unsurprisingly you're one of them because you're fab.
There's about 7 more chapters finished, I think so there'll be more soon!
Slash Queen? Me? *boogies around bedroom with delight*
x x x x x
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