Comments | su_dama: [fic] this must be the place (kanda/lavi)

su_dama

[fic] this must be the place (kanda/lavi)

Apr 23, 2010 13:29

Title: This Must Be The Place
Pairing: Kanda/Lavi, Bookman
Rating: NC-17 for language, sex, crack, and derogation
Disclaimer: DGM belongs to Hoshino Katsura et al
A/N: High School AU Flashback!; the one where Lavi and Kanda have le sex (together) and it is quite le rough ride (together).

( Yeah, like how you hang onto your v-card like gold. )

fanfic, dgrayman

Comments 10

tossino April 23 2010, 22:20:07 UTC

I LOVE YOU

And the rest I already said on Skype.

<333333

You win.

The last line juewohnowrhpwjgpjghwrhhhhhhhh~~ *Goes back to being a pile of goo*

su_dama April 23 2010, 22:30:31 UTC

YESSSSSSSSSSSSS <33333

lawl i originally had a few things different about the ending. but i settled with this because it seemed more fitting. /resurrects into solid form

tossino April 23 2010, 22:31:37 UTC

YESYESSSSS

And it was a good choice indeed! :D Thanks (lol).

hakasha April 23 2010, 22:41:43 UTC

;_; And there went kanda's v-card, and I'm so not unhappy to see it go.

MUST. KEYSMASH. SIRGUHZLMHBZLIUZHGBUAFCNMAZS. *___* XD

*is currently just a nasty little puddle on the floor*

..........the level of awesome has reduced me to this pitiful state, and I just want to wail "KANDAAAAAAAAAA, LAVVVIIIII, WHY YOU SO AWESOMEEEEE AND HOOOTTTT-" but I think the neighbours wouldn't really appreciate that, so I shall refrain.

But please know that I want to. Oh, I want to.

Kanda's head is a strange place, but so awesome at the same time. I loved how sure he was in the beginning of who-does-what-and-goes-where. XD Logistics, logistics, never a problem with one Kanda Yuu. XD at least in theory. XDDDD

I'd say more, but I fear my liquified state and the urge to grin like a murderer at everyone I see are much too overwhelming at the moment. I'll go squeal my fangirlish glee into a pillow now.

su_dama April 24 2010, 00:50:14 UTC

ahahaha I WAS SHOWING CESIA THE DEFINITION OF IT, AND WAS QUITE PLEASANTLY SURPRISED BY THE ENTRIES OF IT ON URBANDICTIONARY.COM.

/plays in puddle~

lol kanda tends to lose his cool in moments like these. particularly if they are drawn out so strategically. he likes to jump right in. sure he thinks about it, but all it does is irk him even more.

ooyyy i'm glad you liked! i squandered and flailed over editing it. for whatever reason, idk. LACKING SIGNIFICANT ENERGY. but perhaps i should start writing more again. cough. ♥

sky_ciel April 24 2010, 03:54:02 UTC

*keels over in laughter* Why does Bookman need the police for? Li Zheng is... Lavi's Mandarin name? o.o Li as in victory and Zheng for justice?

They jammed an elevator!!! Gosh, I'm grinning like crazy to myself now XD

Anyway, great job as usual 8D

su_dama April 24 2010, 19:20:56 UTC

lawl BOOKMAN JUST SAYS THINGS FOR THE PURE HUMOUR OF IT. also it adds a bit of mystery. THESE PEOPLE ARE VERY IRONIC.

YES. THEY HAD TO. IT WAS IN THE STARS. :DDD

thank you! i hope you continue to enjoy.

mellmell April 25 2010, 01:41:11 UTC

Kanda being nervous was too cute. ( >w> )

su_dama April 25 2010, 03:30:12 UTC

he can't help it ;; he's almost innocent.

mellmell April 25 2010, 19:11:12 UTC

It makes up for the teasing of Kanda topping in the beginning.