first paragraph of the story.

[sub__rosa]

I'm working on a short story. Here is the first paragraph

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[melt_]

does he feel good because he's not a rambling blond?
:)

very good.

[sub__rosa]

mwah. ha
ha
ha i want more pictures
of the bearded fellow
and you looking
cute.

[melt_]

haha, there will be more to come.
and i don't look cute in any of the ones i've posted recently!
so there will be cuter ones.

he'll love it that you called him the bearded fellow.

[i_bleed_koolaid]

Man, it so is a game. Haven't you ever had one of those days where you walk around giving yourself (and others) points, a-la "I so just made that yellow light, points for me," "That kid so wins two points for those hideous pants," or even "Way to sleep through class, minus a million points."

Hope the new job is kick ass, amigo. Catch you on the flip side.

[sub__rosa]

Cara. you are my favorite
and i have awarded you
a healthy dosage of points.

alksdfjcallmeal