Mira or Jess. You.

[sueslaps]

shy_dramaqueen with some incestuous Jack for you.

Yesterday's sue has gained some constructive criticism, and three new chapters, but though the author thanks the reviewers, claims that there's almost a plot coming up and explains that she writes pointless chapters on purpose, I'm not reading another three angsty pieces.

TITLE: Where do I belong? Oh, poor

Comments

[roz_morgan]

I would be horrifed at the bad story, I can't stand the YouJack or YouWill storys, but I can't get past the disgust I feel for making Jack want to have sex with a minor.

Okay Historicaly there where child whores but not the point or context of this story, and still this is just so wrong on so many levels.

[daniellafromage]

I read the first chapter, and I don't think I've ever laughed quite so hard at an abusefic before in my life.

Seriously, this fic blows.

[mylla]

I had to go read it after you said that, and wow, you're right, that was hilarious.

“OW!” you scream. There was a big red mark on your arm. “That’s gonna leave a mark.” You think

"That mark's gonna leave a mark!"

I'm an observant one, aren't I?

[heddychaa]

argh. it hurts and stings. mm-mm pedophelia.

[mightyneonfraa]

*pokes author's head* Hello stupid, Elizabeth = no-like-corsets = not-push-for-one-and-get-bitchy-when-refused. Hellloo... more to movie than hot guys dumb-dumb.

......... *looks around* What?

[shy_dramaqueen]

You have to use less and simpler words to make Suethors understand you.

[mightyneonfraa]

Oh yeah, lemme try again.

Suethor see bat? Do good or bat hit head.

[kalio_plaid]

*applauds*

[anonymous]

'If you jumped this pirate

[kalio_plaid]

Can I jump the pirate? Can I? Please? Yeah, I had the same moment.

(Not sure if that word exists but it does for me!)

That right there sums up the entire fic. Substitute 'scenario' for 'word', maybe? Yep, that's it all right. Also try 'fantasy'.