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Real LJ Idol Week 5: My enemies are all too familiar. They're the ones who used to call me friend

Nov 03, 2019 15:35

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tonithegreat November 5 2019, 23:50:52 UTC

Boom! This is so strong. Beautiful!

suesniffsglue November 9 2019, 00:43:10 UTC

Thank you!!

marlawentmad November 6 2019, 20:02:08 UTC

This is exemplary. The imagery is poignant and full of spellwork. The repetition left me shivering. This is a powerful piece.

suesniffsglue November 9 2019, 00:43:40 UTC

You are too kind to me. Thank you so much!

rayaso November 6 2019, 23:57:20 UTC

This was really wonderful! I loved the story in this.

suesniffsglue November 9 2019, 00:43:56 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

alycewilson November 7 2019, 23:26:58 UTC

Well done. It perfectly captures that emotion of running into someone once important to you who you now regard with antipathy.

suesniffsglue November 9 2019, 00:44:48 UTC

It's a true story, too! Grocery store encounter. Thank you!

halfshellvenus November 8 2019, 06:39:46 UTC

There is so much vivid imagery in this, and such a strong sense of being captivated by someone who is bad for you and never really loved you as much as the idea of owning you.

suesniffsglue November 9 2019, 00:45:13 UTC

I'm so glad that came through for you!