Real LJ Idol Week 5: My enemies are all too familiar. They're the ones who used to call me friend

[suesniffsglue]

Once upon a time

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

So much emotion in this. Well done!

[suesniffsglue]

Thank you so much!

[alexanderscttb]

The issue you brought up in the second stanza about a need to possess, things, but also the intangible nature of a person's heart, in this case, was really perceptive, and in need of being addressed. And the drama and mystery and also the sense of triumph that comes out in the final stanza, was awesome!

[suesniffsglue]

I'm so glad you enjoyed. Thank you much!