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Dec 01, 2003 15:26

the morning approach
This night has faded slowly into
the moments before sunrise,
my head lying sleepily on your chest.
I can hear your heart beating, correction, pounding,
within your ribcage, pulsing
against the tissue of my ear.
Absently mindedly I stroke your
hair, and gaze wistfully at
your face. I’m scared,
I want to say, scared I might ( Read more... )

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mijhaten December 1 2003, 13:29:47 UTC
The Morning Approach rocks my socks hardcore, hun.

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suffocateinabag December 1 2003, 13:31:01 UTC
-smiles- thanks! i really liek it too.. it goes in my portfolio, indeed =)

want to come over and edit my essay?

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mijhaten December 3 2003, 17:44:40 UTC
No, but I'll be more than willing to look over your portfolio before Monday.

Give me a shout if you want me to.

BTW, your poems in Whiplash were really good. I like the tile change for Disjointed Daydreams, as well as the edits for all of them. My mom will be getting a copy, and I'm sure she'll say good things too.

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suffocateinabag December 3 2003, 18:42:40 UTC
=) thanks!

and i am sure i will want you to look it over.. its now due on tuesday before noon... so, if you want to come over monday night...

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zute_justzute December 1 2003, 22:18:54 UTC
I like technicolour flavour.

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suffocateinabag December 1 2003, 22:19:55 UTC
thanks =)
i am adding your new name to my list, kay?

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zute_justzute December 1 2003, 22:26:15 UTC
No! Absolutely not!

I'm just kidding. =) Add away. *hugs*

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zolasloststar December 3 2003, 14:18:52 UTC
*is still cursing you*

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suffocateinabag December 3 2003, 16:29:22 UTC
*hugs* i didn't see Nate today..i'l calll him later

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anonymous December 11 2003, 23:14:38 UTC
hi stef. just haven't seen yiu in a while and wanted to wish you a merry christmas.
merry christmas.
<3 paige

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