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BSG fic - First Impressions 3 / 11

Oct 30, 2006 22:09

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jatnj October 30 2006, 23:24:26 UTC

“Don’t worry, Mum. I’ll open up to the right person when I find her. I promise.”

Yeah, too bad she belongs to your brother. =)

Loved the chapter.

suffolkgirl October 31 2006, 09:23:45 UTC

Yeah, I know I went rather heavy on the dramatic irony there, but I just couldn't resist it :)

Glad you liked it.

slightleft November 11 2007, 00:28:03 UTC

I giggled in a stange high pitched tone when i read that line! YAY!!! dramatice irony is amazing and painful and i loved this chapter. "The game didnt go well"? lmao.

first impressions 3 anonymous October 31 2006, 01:59:50 UTC

I enjoyed Kara and Lee playing Triad--it was so them.

I really think you have his character down pat. He doesn't let people in easily.

I liked how you brought Gianne into this, as well.

Great job! Looking forward to the next part!

Re: first impressions 3 suffolkgirl October 31 2006, 09:26:48 UTC

I enjoyed Kara and Lee playing Triad--it was so them.

Glad you liked it - and Kara had to win the game, of course!

One of the fun things about this story was writing the 'first' time they did things like play triad (playing pyramid and flying Viper sims are coming up).

etilia76 November 14 2006, 21:01:55 UTC

Another awesome chapter!
I love that you mentioned Gianne - I love continuity in TV series and I was very disappointed that we've never heard something about her again in canon.
Loved the triad game, this is how I like my pilots the best - playing triad and being snarky, funny and flirty with each other :)

And Caroline is really a wonderful mum, I like your characterisation of her.

suffolkgirl November 14 2006, 21:49:39 UTC

Glad you like my Caroline, I got very fond of her when writing this.

I miss happy pilots too!

i_am_girlfriday January 1 2007, 16:31:57 UTC

Poor Lee! Always the bridesmaid, never the bride! ;)

suffolkgirl January 1 2007, 17:08:42 UTC

I am now having a fit of the giggles from the image that conjured up!!!

mlsky April 16 2007, 04:56:10 UTC

Mmm...I loved the interplay in this chapter. Making Caroline a pyramid fan and unable to really cook is a wonderful touch.

And the triad game was great. Lee meets his match and then some.

Also loved how you brought Gianne into the story. Very nicely done.