BSG fic - First Impressions 4 / 11

[suffolkgirl]

First Impressions 4 / 11

Author : suffolkgirl

Spoilers: Set pre-mini series, so none.

Pairings: Kara/Lee, Kara/Zak

Disclaimer: This world isn't mine, I just borrow it.

Zak takes Kara home for the holidays to meet his family....my take on how Lee and Kara first met.

First Impressions 4

Chapter Four

Kara stirred in Zak’s arms and wondered for a moment

Comments

[jatnj]

Oh, wow. Lee's bitterness towards his dad rears its ugly head and Kara's privy to the whole thing.

Will she run off after him to comfort him?????? I guess I'll have wait to find out. =)

[suffolkgirl]

Leave it to Lee to spoil the family party!

Well, I couldn't write an Adama family fic without Lee's issues with his dad causing some trouble :)

[jatnj]

That's true. His issues are practically another character. =)

first impressions 4

[anonymous]

Man, this started out so carefree and fun, then turned so quickly!

First, I love how you write Kara with Zak. I know the show has never gotten into what their relationship was like, but I can see it being like how you portray it here.

Then Bill calls! I imagine that Zak probably did run interference between Lee and Bill. Lee is still really hurting over everything with his father. He just can't let go of the past, can he?

Will Kara go after him? Looking forward to the next part!

Great job!

Re: first impressions 4

[suffolkgirl]

Man, this started out so carefree and fun, then turned so quickly!

Well, I didn't say this was an angst-free story, just low-level! Most of the angst in this is parental issues :)

Glad my Kara and Zak seemed believeable. I think I was trying to make it like a lighter version of her and Anders.

[etilia76]

Uh oh, Lee and his daddy isuues - the father/son relationship is my second favourite ship in the series, so I'm intrigued how it will turn out in this fic :)

I loved Caroline in this part - especially how she exactly knew that Kara was with Zak in the bedroom :D. So typical a mum :)

“I have a mental age of twelve,” said Kara, with her most innocent smile. “Doesn’t that count?”
Heh, this is so true :D. Especially when she starts to fingerpaint with Lee or wants her ball back (two of my favourite K/L scenes ever) :)

[suffolkgirl]

Uh oh, Lee and his daddy isuues

Yes, that's his main source of angst in this fic :)

Glad you like Caroline, I got very fond of her while writing this.

I'd have to agree with you on the two favourite K/L scenes...although I also like the hose-fight in 'Colonial Day', which is more of the same!

[i_am_girlfriday]

This is so sad. Lee's reaction to his father and whole family is quite realistic. This could be any typical family :( Nicely written.

[mlsky]

Oh my. Is it wrong to say I loved this? I mean it's angsty and all but I love the way you've written Lee's issues and how he'll lose control and say whatever pops into his head.

And Zak and Kara...love their relationship.

Thoroughly enjoying this!