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suffolkgirl

BSG fic - First Impressions 8 / 11

Nov 09, 2006 22:34

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jatnj November 9 2006, 23:23:11 UTC

Loved this chapter.

Have a lovely weekend, and I'm looking forward to your new fic.

suffolkgirl November 12 2006, 17:20:19 UTC

I had a great weekend thanks - went to see a friend in Lancashire & went shopping in Manchester, which was fun if crowded!

Long train journey there and back, but I got another chapter of the new story written on the train.

jatnj November 12 2006, 17:38:44 UTC

That's wonderful. I can't wait to read it.

Welcome home.

first impressions 8 anonymous November 10 2006, 01:27:42 UTC

They watched a silly film while Lee cooked dinner, which turned out to be one of the best roast dinners Kara had ever eaten.--There's just something about the image of Lee cooking that makes me smile.

I like how Kara and Zak know each other so well, but how you show that Lee and Kara are kindred spirits. This line sums up their relationship for me--That you could hate and love someone at the same time, without it being a contradiction.

Great job--can't wait to read chapter 9!

Re: first impressions 8 suffolkgirl November 12 2006, 17:22:55 UTC

I like how Kara and Zak know each other so well, but how you show that Lee and Kara are kindred spirits.

Thanks so much, because that's exactly what I'm trying to get across without hitting the reader over the head with it :)
I didn't want them falling for each other at first sight, but wanted to show there's a strong connection between them from the start.

etilia76 December 20 2006, 10:32:18 UTC

I loved this chapter - how close they are, even in this early state of their relationship. I like that they can connect over their parents issues and are there for each other to listen...

i_am_girlfriday January 1 2007, 17:15:46 UTC

Oh Kara! I just want to wrap her in a blanket and keep her safe. I think your Lee does too.

mlsky April 16 2007, 18:12:16 UTC

Ah...I loved this part. So nice to see those small moments of introspection. And the closeness/connection is almost tangible.

Excellent job!

suffolkgirl April 26 2007, 10:45:08 UTC

Sorry to be so late replying to your comments on this story, was just working my way through my inbox and realised I hadn't.

Glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for taking the time to comment on each chapter. Glad you liked the bit with Lee and Kara competing over the games in the amusement arcade, I had great fun writing that bit.