first impressions 10
anonymous
November 14 2006, 18:52:46 UTC
Wow, the simulator stuff was fun! I liked how you showed them as equals (so many times I read stuff where Kara is so much better than Lee, which, IMO, isn't the case). Then the almost kiss--that was hot!
Re: first impressions 10suffolkgirlNovember 14 2006, 20:02:25 UTC
I liked how you showed them as equals (so many times I read stuff where Kara is so much better than Lee, which, IMO, isn't the case).
My opinion is that Kara might be slightly better than Lee but not much, otherwise they wouldn't be so competitive - no point if he's got no hope of beating her!
I decided Kara wouldn't beat him this time because she doesn't know him well enough yet to predict what he'll do - and also, a draw seemed to fit the story because it showed that they're a good match for each other :)
I laughed at Kara avoiding paperwork!!
She hasn't worked out how to con Lee into doing it for her yet!
Thanks for commenting as usual. You can probably guess from the ending of this one that the next chapter is going to be guilt-ridden :)
Uh, no wonder that Kara feels so guilty in canon about Zak (see? I already accept that as their back story - I think that really is a sign, how real, how very them this story feels. Awesome.)
The simulator part was excellent. VERY well written...totally visualized everything.
Also liked Kara catching herself wanting to be challenged by Lee. It's a part of them I don't often see explored...and I think they both need that dynamic.
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I laughed at Kara avoiding paperwork!!!
Looking forward to the last chapter!
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My opinion is that Kara might be slightly better than Lee but not much, otherwise they wouldn't be so competitive - no point if he's got no hope of beating her!
I decided Kara wouldn't beat him this time because she doesn't know him well enough yet to predict what he'll do - and also, a draw seemed to fit the story because it showed that they're a good match for each other :)
I laughed at Kara avoiding paperwork!!
She hasn't worked out how to con Lee into doing it for her yet!
Thanks for commenting as usual. You can probably guess from the ending of this one that the next chapter is going to be guilt-ridden :)
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It was sweet how Kara kept thinking of Lee while they were apart - and I enjoyed the simulator challenge.
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I know! People in the BSG world just have no sense of timing :)
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The simulator part was excellent. VERY well written...totally visualized everything.
Also liked Kara catching herself wanting to be challenged by Lee. It's a part of them I don't often see explored...and I think they both need that dynamic.
So wonderful!!
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