BSG fic - First Impressions 11 / 11

[suffolkgirl]

Life didn’t get much better than this. Sunshine, the prospect of a good meal, an afternoon of flying to look forward to - and Lee Adama, all to herself.

Just for a little while.

The End

Comments

first impressions 11

[anonymous]

I really enjoyed this story. You capture the underlying attraction between Lee and Kara perfectly. I can really see this happening.

I loved everything about this and am looking forward to your next story.

Re: first impressions 11

[suffolkgirl]

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I had a bit of BSG writers block recently, but that seems to have passed and I am now motoring through a new story (shouldn't have said that - tempting fate!)

I've also got one more old story I haven't posted here yet (Lost and Found) although you may have read that at fanfiction.net. I'll get round to posting it here soon.

[jatnj]

This is the way it should have ended, but the devil on my shoulder wanted something entirely different. =)

Lovely story about their friendship and the innuendos of something more.

[suffolkgirl]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

They are hopeless aren't they - all those years later they still haven't sorted themselves out!

[ph8]

This was lovely, thank you :) You've captured the affection and attraction perfectly. It's ages since I've enjoyed a pre-mini fic so much.

[suffolkgirl]

Thanks very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love reading pre-mini fics so I had to write one :)

[i_am_girlfriday]

I loved this story from start to finish, as you may guess by my incessant comments. :) Your writing is unpretentious and you really captured each of their voices. I find that very hard to do. I am so glad I had a morning to catch up on at least some of your fics. P.S. I am friending you. ;)

[suffolkgirl]

Thank you, I'm really pleased you enjoyed it, especially because I've enjoyed reading the stories you've posted the last couple of days as well. I'll be friending you back :)

[burned_phoenix]

oh noo, why does it have to be over yet?! :( I loved it! :)

wanna know some of my favorite lines? here you go

Kara Thrace wasn’t the type of girl that guys took home to meet their mothers. She was the type of girl that mothers warned their sons away from

[suffolkgirl]

Wow, thank you for such a long comment. I can tell you really did enjoy it from the number of favourite lines! :)

I'm glad you put in the 'mental age of twelve' one, that's my favourite joke in this whole story. I'm always interested to see if readers laugh at the same bits I do.

I decided to end the story here because going on would only have led to angst/guilt/Zak's death and that didn't really fit with the light tone of the story.

[burned_phoenix]

yeah, and I tried to not let it get too long already :D

the whole ice cream and swinging part just made me smile and giggle. I can eat ice cream even when I'm freezing to death myself :D

you're right :) I still love it :D thanks a lot!