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BSG fic - Picking up the Pieces 6 / 12

Dec 07, 2006 08:20

Chapter Six

Kara stopped looking through Lee after that, and he stopped trying to provoke her into leaving. But he still kept his distance, only seeing her at meetings, only speaking to her about work.

He watched her, though. Listened to the comms when she was flying. Knew she still stayed out of the rec room, barely spoke when she was on ( Read more... )

bsg fic - picking up the pieces

Comments 17

etilia76 December 7 2006, 08:41:57 UTC

*squeees*

Yay! They make progress! First Lee notices, that she's still family, then they start repairing their friendship...what a great chapter to start my morning :D

I loved the flying and running, that they challenge each other again...I'd love to see such a slow rebuild of their friendship in canon. It makes a good base for more and probably really offers them a chance to work through past issues....

I loved this fabulous chapter :) Great job!

suffolkgirl December 8 2006, 18:46:32 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. Thought you would since it's a nice happy chapter :)

I thought they needed to repair their friendship before anything else.

ez_as_pi December 7 2006, 13:12:33 UTC

*flails*

Pilots flying together.... *flails more*

Pilots running together.... *squees and flails*

Lee NOT married yet.... *prays to all the lords of kobol*

Wonderful wonderful chapter!

suffolkgirl December 8 2006, 18:50:56 UTC

I gather you liked it then :)

With all that flailing, maybe it's a good thing I left pilots playing triad together to the next chapter!

ez_as_pi December 8 2006, 19:38:52 UTC

I'll try to control myself! (yes, I liked it a LOT)

jatnj December 7 2006, 23:03:46 UTC

I'm glad they're making an effort to be friends again...of course that can only lead to one thing..... =)

suffolkgirl December 8 2006, 18:56:52 UTC

One thing? *looks innocent* I can't think what you mean...

picking up the pieces 6 anonymous December 8 2006, 01:32:57 UTC

Aww...I loved this chapter. I love the banter between these two. I could easily visualize them flying together, racing, doing all those roles and loops. And now Kara is getting him back into shape--woo-hoo!

They are slowly coming back together. I was smiling at the end.

I also liked the scene at the memorial wall. We've never seen Lee mourn his mother or Zak. It was nice to see.

Another great part! Looking forward to chapter 7!

Re: picking up the pieces 6 suffolkgirl December 8 2006, 19:01:25 UTC

We've never seen Lee mourn his mother or Zak. It was nice to see.

Good, I put that in because it was something I've not seen much of in fic either, and I thought it was a nice way to give Lee almost an excuse to forgive Kara by realising that Zak and Caroline would have wanted him to help her when she's depressed. Gives him a reason to do what he wants to do but otherwise would probably refuse to do because he's too stubborn.

I had great fun writing them flying together, and yes, Kara is getting him back in shape!

boom_queen December 8 2006, 02:39:06 UTC

I just barely found this storyline and had to devour all of the chapters so far as fast as I could! This is really great--thank you so much for writing it. I'm very much looking forward to the rest of it :)

suffolkgirl December 8 2006, 19:02:36 UTC

Thanks for commenting, I'm very happy you're enjoying the story so much. Hope you continue to enjoy the rest!