BSG fic - Picking up the Pieces 7 / 12

[suffolkgirl]

Chapter Seven

Running together became a daily event, and after a few days it seemed natural to end it by having breakfast together in the mess.  That became a daily event as well.

Slowly and cautiously, they were rebuilding their friendship.  Sometimes they had lunch together as well, and they snatched a flight together whenever they could.

Comments

[amiyuy]

WAAAH cliff hanger!

I'm afraid...Lee's prob gonna spook and run. ;_;

I absolutely love how you write these characters.

(it's too late tonight/early this morning for coherent sentences/thoughts -_-)

[suffolkgirl]

I'm afraid...Lee's prob gonna spook and run. ;_;

I'm saying nothing!

Glad you enjoyed it.

[ez_as_pi]

Oh my! Verrrry interesting...

Next chapter please?

[suffolkgirl]

There is no more, this is where I ran out of inspiration...just kidding!

Next chapter on Tuesday.

[ez_as_pi]

There is no more, this is where I ran out of inspiration.

*is ded on floor*

That would suck, I'm glad there is indeed more!

[suffolkgirl]

I'm sorry, I have a twisted sense of humour...comes with being English :)

picking up the pieces 7

[anonymous]

Ooh, I really liked this chapter!

I absolutely love the banter you write between Lee and Kara--it's very real and very true to the characters. I'm glad that Kara was able to get Lee to join in the card game. My heart broke a little at how alone he must feel.

Then the cliffhnager--OMG! You left it there?!? I CANNOT wait to read chapter 8! Hurry!

GREAT PART!!!!!!!!!

Re: picking up the pieces 7

[suffolkgirl]

Glad you liked the banter, it's fun to write.

I always feel sorry for Bill when you see how isolated he is by being in command, I'm sure Lee must have experienced it too on Pegasus.

[etilia76]

What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to know how Lee reacts!

I really loved this chapter, it has everything I love about pilots - the teasing, challenging and a Triad game. I'm such a sucker for Triad stories involving these two :D
And I thought it was very nice of Kara that she tries to integrate Lee in that game and make him relax around his crew.

Lovely lovely chapter!

[suffolkgirl]

Glad you liked the triad game - I did have to go and read up on the rules of poker in Wikipedia to make sure it sounded vaguely realistic! I've never played poker myself.

Maybe it's unlikely Lee would beat Kara, but she got to win the viper race last chapter - it's Lee's turn!

[etilia76]

It was really a realistic game (but I haven't played poker very often in the last time...I prefer other card games :))

I think it's believable that Lee beats Kara - at least once - he knows her well enough and I think he had time enough to brood over her behaviour, so meanwhile he gets the hints how and when she's bluffing, I think.

And you're right, sometimes he has to win, too - otherwise she becomes too smug ;)

[beck1]

You can't leave me hanging there- that's just cruel!

[suffolkgirl]

Sorry, that's just the kind of mean person I am :)