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BSG fic - Picking up the Pieces 9 / 12

Dec 14, 2006 08:22

Kara took a deep breath and looked around at the stars, at the comforting darkness of space surrounding her. At the familiar lines of her viper.

This was home. The place where she was always safe, always in control.

She clung to that reassuring thought as she cleared her throat and spoke over the open comm channel to CIC.

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bsg fic - picking up the pieces

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abluegirl December 14 2006, 15:47:58 UTC

Awesome. I can't wait to find out what Lee's reaction will be! :)

nvrpromise December 14 2006, 17:25:01 UTC

Awe totally cute. :D

tracyj23 December 14 2006, 19:55:56 UTC

Aw, that was wonderful! I finally had a chance to catch up with the rest - Nikolas was supposed to come home today but isn't so I still have a few moments of peace and quiet.

I loved the way you had Kara come up with the 'spectacular' idea - somehow it just felt so right. And I love the fact that it mirrors Flight of the Phoenix too, where he only calls her Kara when he's worried. :)

The Kara/Helo chapter was great too - you have him written the way I picture him, strong, solid and unmovable. He will always be there and never let himself get upset by her behaviour. He truly is her best friend, regardless of how she feels about Lee.

Can't wait for the rest now!!!

suffolkgirl December 14 2006, 20:36:03 UTC

Hope Nikolas is back home with you soon. I'd been wondering how he was getting on.

Glad you liked Kara's idea - it just seemed to fit that she can get the courage up to tell Lee she loves him when she's safe in the 'comfort zone' of her viper, plus it's not face to face. Eases her into it. :)

boom_queen December 15 2006, 02:26:22 UTC

That's awesome! You picked a great way for her to talk to him--I can picture it perfectly.

Yay for pilot!love :)

suffolkgirl December 15 2006, 08:29:08 UTC

Yay, glad you liked it. It just seemed to fit Kara's character.

picking up the pieces 9 anonymous December 15 2006, 03:11:15 UTC

Another great part. I love how you write Kara here--I can easily see her trying to get Lee to listen and him being his stubborn self, not letting her.

I loved her "spectacular" plan. She told him those three little words in the most perfect place for her! Can't wait to see what happens next!