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suffolkgirl

BSG fic - Picking up the Pieces 10 / 12

Dec 16, 2006 17:24

Chapter Ten

Lee stared at the dradis screen in blank disbelief, receiver gripped in his hand.

He must be hallucinating. He could have sworn Kara had just said-

Ridiculous. Of course she hadn’t.

Maybe he was dreaming. One of those dreams where embarrassing things happened in public places. He involuntarily looked down at himself to make ( Read more... )

bsg fic - picking up the pieces

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suffolkgirl December 16 2006, 22:26:53 UTC

Aw, thanks. Glad to brighten up your weekend!

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suffolkgirl December 16 2006, 22:28:13 UTC

Thanks very much, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

aberforthsgoat December 16 2006, 19:00:54 UTC

Equipment closet, Ha!
Much love, very little patience with the waiting for more.

suffolkgirl December 16 2006, 22:29:22 UTC

Well, you can't have an L/K fic without an equipment closet in there somewhere...!

jatnj December 16 2006, 19:17:31 UTC

She's giving you a chance, Lee. Takeittakeittakeittakeit!!!!!

I loved Lee's reaction - checking to see if he was naked. That was priceless!!!

Please don't leave us waiting too long for the next chapter.

Yes! jatnj December 16 2006, 19:57:03 UTC

Kara not running anymore! Can´t wait until that happens on the show!

Thanks for this!

suffolkgirl December 16 2006, 22:31:50 UTC

I loved Lee's reaction - checking to see if he was naked. That was priceless!!!

Hee. That made me laugh so much when I had the idea I couldn't resist putting it in. Totally flabbergasted, poor boy.

jatnj December 16 2006, 22:50:50 UTC

I could imagine the expression of utter shock on his face. I loved that he was looking around the room to see if anyone else had heard it. That was great.

tracyj23 December 16 2006, 19:54:14 UTC

Ooh I loved it. She's finally opening up - I like the 'the only thing that has changed is that I'm not afraid to admit it'. How true! Now if only Lee will take her up on her offer ... of course Dee will be livid I'm assuming (though you might not even have written her into it) but Lee needs to go with his gut and trust her even though she's burnt him in the past.

This is getting really good as it comes to a close ... of course I'm sad about that, but I'm sure you'll be writing more. :)

suffolkgirl December 16 2006, 22:36:58 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it.

Lee has a few decisions to make...and Dee is in the next chapter. :)

I'm sure I will be writing more! Not till the New Year though, too busy!