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BSG fic - Lost and Found 2 / 15

Jan 03, 2007 20:16

Chapter 2

“What happened?” asked Adama.

He was doing his best to keep his voice under control, but Kara could hear the raw pain underneath. He had lost both his sons now. She noticed that Laura Roslin, who was sitting next to him, put a hand on his arm.

At least she was noticing things again. For a while there everything had been a blur. She ( Read more... )

bsg fic - lost and found

Comments 22

nvrpromise January 3 2007, 20:44:53 UTC

Guh, the end of this part killed me. Well done.

suffolkgirl January 3 2007, 21:58:52 UTC

Thank you. I hope you revive, because I'm afraid there's more angst to come... :)

spiderwebb January 3 2007, 21:50:07 UTC

oh, the pain is not a friend. very nice chapter.

suffolkgirl January 3 2007, 22:00:16 UTC

Thank you. And there is a good purpose for all this angst!

ez_as_pi January 3 2007, 22:28:55 UTC

I read this over on Fanfic.net last year... still slays me.... (in a good way of course!)

suffolkgirl January 4 2007, 08:18:38 UTC

Thanks. I did go to town with the angst on this one!

ez_as_pi January 5 2007, 01:12:24 UTC

Angst can be good, especially when I know the ending is good!!

canadiangirl_86 January 3 2007, 23:47:27 UTC

Second chapter's even better than the first. The last few paragraphs were gut-wrenching.

suffolkgirl January 4 2007, 08:19:48 UTC

Thanks so much. :) The gut-wrenching stuff isn't over just yet...

i_am_girlfriday January 4 2007, 00:55:50 UTC

Meep. :( All the what ifs are going to drive poor Kara mad. This was really sad and sentimental.

suffolkgirl January 4 2007, 08:20:59 UTC

Glad you liked it. Kara is suffering, poor girl! I'm rather mean to her in this story.