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BSG fic - Lost and Found 8 / 15

Jan 16, 2007 14:34

Chapter 8

For the first time he could remember, he slept without dreams, blessedly dark and peaceful.

When he woke, everything was different. The world had gained its sharp edges again. Sounds were clear and defined. Both the sickening, giddy sensation that had plagued him for so long, and the smothering blanket of inertia which had covered ( Read more... )

bsg fic - lost and found

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ammonite7 January 16 2007, 17:02:01 UTC

One of my favorite chapters. Their dialogue is so fantastic. Especially love how they naturally go right into the same old teasing, even though he doesnt't remember her. And "Stardoe" - wonderful.

suffolkgirl January 16 2007, 17:27:59 UTC

I'm glad it seems natural that they would go right back into the teasing despite his amnesia - my idea was that they are still the same personalities and so would react to each other in the same way. I'm not sure whether Lee would really be up to this kind of conversation at the moment, but hey, artistic licence. This story is purely for fun anyway. :)

lost and found 8 anonymous January 16 2007, 19:22:05 UTC

Lee's finally awake!

I feel so bad for his father and Kara--they have him back but they don't since he doesn't remember them.

I like how Lee and Kara instantly feel back into their routine even though Lee doesn't remember her. I've always enjoyed their banter, and you made it very true to the characters.

Another terrific chapter!!!!

mick

Re: lost and found 8 suffolkgirl January 16 2007, 20:55:07 UTC

Yeah, it's nice to have Lee back in the story. I remembering being very happy when writing this to finally be able to do his POV, I find him so much easier to write than Kara.

Poor Adama - but at least Lee isn't trying to kill him because he thinks he's a Cylon :)

Re: lost and found 8 anonymous January 17 2007, 02:29:23 UTC

but at least Lee isn't trying to kill him because he thinks he's a Cylon :)
LOL!!!!!!!

sracheg January 16 2007, 19:30:54 UTC

Love it!!! That's a relly good Apollo/Starbuck dialogue!!!. And I'm smiling

suffolkgirl January 16 2007, 20:55:45 UTC

See! Told you that you wouldn't need a tissue for this chapter. :)

abluegirl January 16 2007, 19:33:04 UTC

“I thought you’d never tease me like this again,” she said finally, hazel eyes locked on his. “I thought I’d lost you.”

Awwwwwwww.... that totally tugged my heart strings, right there. Loved this chapter. :)

suffolkgirl January 16 2007, 20:57:08 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you like this part, I enjoyed writing it - though maybe that was because I finally got to write a Lee/Kara conversation after 8 chapters. :)

nvrpromise January 16 2007, 19:34:36 UTC

“Kara’s - hard to explain. I think I’ll let her do it herself.”

Hahaha perfect.

suffolkgirl January 16 2007, 20:58:16 UTC

Yes, she's not easy to explain, is she? And Lee hasn't even started asking the *really* awkward questions yet...