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BSG fic - Lost and Found 12 / 15

Jan 25, 2007 08:23

Chapter 12

Bill Adama looked at his son and drew a deep breath. He wasn’t looking forward to this, but he couldn’t just stand by and do nothing.

“Son, why have you fallen out with Kara?”

Lee looked up warily from his ever-present paperwork. “What makes you think we’ve fallen out?”

Bill sighed. “Lee, the whole of life station heard you ( Read more... )

bsg fic - lost and found

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lost and found 12 anonymous January 25 2007, 12:53:56 UTC

Hmm, so last chapter Dee let it slip about Sam, and this chapter Bill let it slip about Zak. Lee's head must be spinning!

I absolutely LOVED the Helo/Kara scene. I was laughing during the exchange about the observation lounge (“The things being Apollo’s mouth and your tongue?”; “I see. Not yet fully recovered, is he?”) Only Helo could get away with talking to her like that. I also like that he was able to go to Lee to talk about Kara, and that Lee actually listened to him. I hope Lee and Kara get to have that talk.

And I really think that Kara's middle name is "complicated." Does that girl ever make things easy for herself?LOL

Great part! Looking forward to the next part (and the Lee/Kara convo).

mick

Re: lost and found 12 suffolkgirl January 27 2007, 18:07:43 UTC

Glad you liked Kara and Helo, they're always fun to write. And no, Kara never makes things easy for herself, does she?

ez_as_pi January 25 2007, 13:46:50 UTC

*wanders into sick bay...hugs poor confused Lee.... wanders to the rec room... hugs poor messed up Kara.... wanders to the bunkroom and hugs poor... well, just hugs Helo..cause he's hot...*

suffolkgirl January 27 2007, 18:08:29 UTC

LOL! I can totally understand your reasoning there :)

ez_as_pi January 27 2007, 18:28:50 UTC

Sometimes everyone just needs a hug!!

jatnj January 26 2007, 23:54:28 UTC

For some reason, this is my favourite chapter. Maybe because I had great fun writing it. Especially Bill putting his foot in it over Zak.

That was a good part. ;D And then he sends Helo in to get Lee and Kara back together.

suffolkgirl January 27 2007, 18:09:02 UTC

They've got no chance with Bill and Helo ganging up on them :)

mlsky June 6 2007, 01:20:11 UTC

Ah...this chapter rocks! And I love the pacing...kinda like dominoes hitting right when they should. And yeah...who can blame Kara for not attempting to explain the unexplainable? And yet how can who can blame Lee for wondering WTF? is going on. Especially when Adama drops the plum info about Zak.

EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!