BSG fic - Promises 12 / 17

[suffolkgirl]

Chapter Twelve

They returned to the caves in silence.  Kara felt more and more embarrassed with every step.  Had she really cried in front of Lee?  And told him she needed him?  She cringed inwardly, almost wishing the ground would open and swallow her up.  She was glad he was leading the way and not looking at her.

She only hoped she’d got

Comments

[tracyj23]

I love Helo too (as you know) so I was glad to see him. He always provides some relief to the situation that is Kara and lee - and a little fun is a good thing.

It's good to see Lee taking an interest in things ... and knowing he's had some side plans is good for Kara, if not Roslin. At least she knows he's trying to help, in his own way.

Keep pushing Kara - you can get through to him - no one else can do it.

I'd leave more feedback about specific things but I'm a bit rushed today myself. It was a good chapter though and I'm really looking forward to the next one. :)

[suffolkgirl]

I love Helo too (as you know) so I was glad to see him. He always provides some relief to the situation that is Kara and lee - and a little fun is a good thing.

And this story definitely needs a little fun :-)

I definitely need to write something lighter next - if I can come up with a good idea that isn't angst-ridden!

In reply to your other message today, I would love to read your Whose Line is it Anyway stories - I watched it a few times some years ago, so have a vague idea what you're talking about. Sounds intriguing!

[tracyj23]

I shall begin posting soon then. There's two of them - one was a questions only thing and the other was one word phrases only (I think - otherwise it was 3 words - I can't remember now).

I'm sure you'll enjoy them. I certainly did. :) (Isn't that like the cook praising dinner? oh well, I guess we have to sing our own praises once in a while ...) :D

[jatnj]

It's nice to see that Lee's back in the fight. I'm glad Kara was able to get through to him.

Is Laura seriously upset that Baltar's dead? Oh, like she enjoyed having him around....

I'm glad Helo showed up. He's always a nice diversion to the angst.

[suffolkgirl]

Is Laura seriously upset that Baltar's dead? Oh, like she enjoyed having him around....

Well, in this AU, they became close friends and really bonded over the burdens of being President...okay, not really :-)

She's just not very happy about Lee going behind her back - again.

[etilia76]

thanks to etilia76 for the icon
You're very welcome :D

Awesome new chapter. Lee makes progress - I love that he is engaged in the mission now, Kara is on the right way to crack his walls :)
Nice to see Helo, I liked the scene where Kara feels slightly uncomfortable about Helo spilling the beans about her secret feelings regarding lee :D

[suffolkgirl]

Awesome new chapter. Lee makes progress - I love that he is engaged in the mission now, Kara is on the right way to crack his walls :)

You see, he did listen to what she said in their argument in chapter 8, it just took a while to get through!

As for Helo and Kara, I'm glad you liked them, I always have such fun writing scenes of them together.

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[anonymous]

Another great part. You've set up well the escape--I'm really looking forward to that. I was so happy to see that Lee is actually still in the game. I just love the fact that he and Gaeta are working together! And I also like the appearance by Helo.

Can't wait until the next part. Excellent job!

Re: promises 12

[suffolkgirl]

I was so happy to see that Lee is actually still in the game.

Well, his revenge thing includes the Cylons as well as Baltar, that's what the explosion plan was for originally, before the fleet turned up. All part of his promise not to let the Cylons win. I wanted to show he hadn't just been sitting around being depressed.

[mlsky]

Wow...this is an awesome transitional chapter. Adding Helo into the mix was brilliant. And his almost clueless innocence to the mess that is Lee was great.

*flies off to the next chapter*