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freedom 4 anonymous October 19 2006, 17:57:58 UTC
Hmmm, interesting developments.

First, I like the banter these two have. I've always enjoyed seeing them giving each other a hard time in a playful sort of way. But there is so much chemistry that I can see this actually happening--one minute they're playing around, and the next minute they cross the line from firendship into something more.

I can see Lee thinking this as well, and it's a sad thought (to me, anyway)--But still his hand tightened instinctively on her shoulder as he fell asleep, and his final thought was to hope that she was still there in the morning.--He wants her so badly, and he's so afraid he's going to lose her.

Great job--looking forward to part 5!

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Re: freedom 4 suffolkgirl October 20 2006, 20:24:13 UTC
Glad you found the change in mood believable and not too sudden. And that you liked the banter, it's always fun to write!

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jatnj October 19 2006, 21:48:04 UTC
Wonderful chapter. Drunken frakking is always a plus. I hope the don't regret it in the morning.

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etilia76 October 20 2006, 07:41:40 UTC
I loved the banter and the fact that they're still able to be drinking buddies...

I also hope, they won't regret it in the morning - I love drunken frakking stories very much, too, but with these two I'm never sure if they won't screw up the situation the next morning...

Awesome chapter, can't wait for more :)

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einhorn_13 November 19 2006, 18:55:41 UTC
Oooh, finally caught up with this story! Loving it! The flying together in the last chapter was so sweet and now semi-drunken viper pilot sex! So good! I need lots and lots of happy thoughts with the lack of Kara/Lee in the last couple of episodes. Also, Kara'd better be there in the morning! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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suffolkgirl November 19 2006, 19:10:14 UTC
Thank you, so pleased you're enjoying it.

They are very cute together when they're flying and having drunken banter, aren't they :) I always have fun writing the banter.

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ammonite7 November 20 2006, 19:32:24 UTC
Of course they're going to regret it in the morning. That's the whole point isn't it. Kara's going back to Sam and Lee's going to be terribly hurt, betrayed and pissed. It was a good frak, a last goodbye for Kara, and Lee thought it was a beginning. As usual, they were on different pages of the same book - what a lovely tragedy it is, too.

Great chapter, great believable transition.

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suffolkgirl November 20 2006, 21:38:43 UTC
As usual, they were on different pages of the same book

What a lovely way to put it.

You're quite right of course, Kara sees it as the end and Lee sees it as the beginning, and so it's all going to end badly.

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