Comments | sulmerel: Another beginning

sulmerel

Oct 01, 2008 00:07

This is the other thing I wrote in Eilat. A beginning inspired by smoke I saw from afar while my father was driving me to the airport.

( A column of black smoke punctured the serenity of the dawn. )

Comments 2

pozmack October 1 2008, 18:38:03 UTC

It's all very epic, but I like it nonetheless :o

sulmerel October 3 2008, 17:16:23 UTC

"But"? Why is that a "but"? Epic is good! I like epic!