Part Four

Jul 27, 2011 16:38


Title: Finding Our Way Back
Author: sunalsosets 
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4,765

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He was having fun.
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seajellybaby August 4 2011, 07:26:38 UTC
Oh the tears!!! This is one heartbreaking chapter!

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sunalsosets August 4 2011, 19:34:06 UTC
Aww, sorry (lol). Thanks for reading.

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wheelie47 August 6 2011, 12:22:13 UTC
Wow - have to say that I'm loving this story! You write it so well... you can really feel the emotions and the overwhelming heartbreak all the way through. This line got to me most - “I can’t fight for someone who doesn’t want me anymore.” - just so sad and so final.

But really I just want to get them in a room and bang their heads together and tell them to stop being so stupid!

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sunalsosets August 6 2011, 17:44:09 UTC
Thanks for reading and enjoying it and yeah, they can both be stupid but it's because they love each other so much.

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random_nic August 7 2011, 13:39:16 UTC
Dear Noah,

Please stop being a poopyhead.

Sincerely, Nicole

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ext_5493173 December 8 2020, 11:51:07 UTC
Dont be mean to Noah now....

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ext_5493173 December 8 2020, 12:08:42 UTC
Noah can be such a tragic character, its so hard to drop the walls that he actually needed to have to deal with his father...who, up until Luke came along had been the one person he had the most contact with....very sad. No long term friends...just abusive Colonel Crazy...and Noah, having grown up shut off from any kind of real love surrounded himself with old movies and has a kind of, i guess old fashioned, i guess, nobility about him...mixed with a kind of military code of doing the right thing.... (yeah, yeah, tv show) still though, he needs therapy....and Luke ( ... )

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