Drabble #3

[sunalsosets]

Title: The Fight
Author:sunalsosets
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,221
Pairings: Luke/Noah
Summary: Luke and Noah have a fight that leads to a discussion of something deeper.
Comments: I don't know if this qualifies as a drabble considering it's over 2,000 words but there you have it. Also, I have no clue how it ended up being this long.

The Fight

Comments

[valenti1965]

Totally loved this. I was wondering why Noah was so off....mmmm yeah I can see that an email from Reid would do that however! Glad Noah was able to tell Luke about it though. Great drabble! Loved it x

[123cariad]

Really enjoyed your story , loved how Noah can finally telll Luke whats going on in that head of his x

[firelily]

This all seemed very very REAL to me, because it's so normal and natural in a relationship to have a huge fight over something so "minor". Only it isn't minor in Noah's mind, because first he sees that email, and then Luke cancels on dinner, as if to say that yeah, Noah's NOT the first priority in his life, and Noah just snaps immediately to anger. We've all been there, and I liked that this was such a realistic fight (not too dramatic, but not resolved too quickly either) because it makes their relationship seem even more real. I used to love their fights on the show...they always did such a good job on them!

Noah remained silent for a few seconds before finally mumbling, “It smelled a lot better two hours ago.”

And with that comment, he slowly pulled out of Luke’s embrace.

...and...

Seizing upon the interruption as an escape, Noah moved around Luke’s body, carefully avoiding his eyes as he headed towards the porch.I especially loved parts like these. I've totally been in fights like that! When you're just moving around the

[jackie_oh]

Ugh, for some reason I just love it when the boys fight. It's like, one of the many weird things about me. But I love, love, LOVE it. So, needless to say, I love this too. I loved how Noah kept everything all bottled up and went to go walk the dog. And the fact that they have a dog, named Hemmingway.

Just all around love.

[random_nic]

Very nice. I dig some angst with my boys so long as it's all okay in the end. And this end was VERY okay. Nice job!