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[KiyoharuxTora] "The Good Samaritan", 04a/0?

May 12, 2011 15:40

"THE GOOD SAMARITAN", 04a/0?

BANDS/ARTISTS: Kiyoharu, Alice Nine, SCREW, Kagrra,, Danger Gang
CHARACTERS: Kiyoharu, Tora, Shou, Byou, Nao (ex-Kagrra,), Rei (ex-Danger Gang)
PAIRINGS: KiyoharuxTora (not the focus, though; see genres)
RATING: PG13-15 for the entire series, may get higher in the later chapters
GENRE: AU, adventure, action, crime
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kiyoharu, pg13-pg15, crime, screw, kiyoharuxtora, action, danger gang, blindcottonlove, au, alice nine, kagrra

Comments 12

bauci May 12 2011, 16:44:53 UTC

Oh, loved how at home Tora seemed, right from the beginning. The interaction between Kiyoharu and Tora felt surprisingly believable, you built the scene perfectly for us to eat it up~

blindcottonlove May 16 2011, 19:35:40 UTC

Late-ish reply is late-ish! *bows*

I was nervous, gotta admit, about brining more romantic elements into the story, I'm happy to hear that the scene worked :) Returning to the action soon, tho!

Thanks for reading again, it's great to have a devoted commenter like you♥ It keeps my powers up :Dv

snotkrush May 13 2011, 10:08:54 UTC

Poor little Shou! Can this situation get even worst for him?
But I loved the two sexy misterious guys having a sexy misterious kiss...I hope there will be more!

blindcottonlove May 16 2011, 19:40:13 UTC

Well, it actually can 8D I like teasing him a bit more. But he's a tough boy, he survives everything<3

More of the chapter will be posted very soon, as I first get my last essay returned to Uni before summer vacation! *applauds herself* And whether there'll be more romantic stuff, well, only time can show :D

Thanks for reading again, it's a pleasure to know you're enjoying the story<3

suslik_san May 15 2011, 13:56:51 UTC

mymy, looks like we get to see some Shou&Kiyo interaction
sounds fun to me!

blindcottonlove May 16 2011, 19:55:48 UTC

Well, more like the lack of the said interaction, if Kiyoharu gets to decide :D

You're welcome<3 And thanks for taking the time to comment again! :)

suslik_san May 16 2011, 20:16:47 UTC

Kiyoharu can't be that mean, can he? T_T

nah, wait till I'll be bugging you with questions on the plot 8D

ladyrevania May 17 2011, 07:44:11 UTC

Poor Shou, he hoped he will spend some more time with Tora, but instead he ended up with his partner... but somehow I like it, that every time he gets disappointed, not everything in your life has to go perfectly well, that's how it is.

blindcottonlove June 4 2011, 11:03:41 UTC

Late reply is late! *bows in shame* Thank you, it's great you've kept commenting and reading although I've been ridiculously bad at updating♥

I've tried to keep the story... Well, saying 'realistic' probably would be an overstatement but toned down I guess, so that the developments of the relationships would seem credible -if that makes any sense :D Tora's been doing his thing for a long time, I don't want it to seem easy for Shou to get through his barrier.

ladyrevania June 4 2011, 11:10:16 UTC

If it was too easy it would get boring :]

leveldevil May 25 2011, 03:43:48 UTC

Hi! :D

I discovered your fanfic today completely by accident and... I'm really liking this! I had pretty much forgotten about J-Rock fanfiction because I'm a fan of older bands and well-written stories, and it doesn't look like to be the fashion these days... Not to mention I'm no big fan of Gazetto or A9 and everything is about them.

So! Your fanfic was a very nice surprise and I can't honestly remember the last time I made it to the next chapter of something, so... Congratulations, maybe? XD I'm really liking the characters, even if I don't care much for Shou IRL (I'm learning to like him in here as the narrator xD) and the plot and I hope to see a bit of Tora's "job" revealed soon. You make me want to watch a mafia movie or something.

Please keep up with the writing!

blindcottonlove June 4 2011, 10:58:04 UTC

Well why, thank you! There're so many wonderful things in your comment that I'm just happily bouncing on my chair :D It's quite flattering that my little story managed to pique your interest, esp since you're not into all of the bands involved. I've spent craploads of time for planning the story, so it feels rewarding to have new readers appear out of the blue :)

Hee, I'm probably ridiculously incoherent here, lol. So, a big fat thank you, and hopefully you will continue enjoying the story :D I posted another chapter a while earlier, and after that we finally get to the main twist of the plot, so expect more action and hot bleeding men from now onwards ;)