Comments | sunev789: [FIC] one, two, three, four...how many more? {HoMin, PG-13}

sunev789

[FIC] one, two, three, four...how many more? {HoMin, PG-13}

Jan 27, 2009 13:33

{one, two, three, four...how many more?}
HoMin, PG-13
Angst & maybe fluff? Implied sex.
I honestly have no idea where this came from...it just kinda happened. T___T

( You weren’t built for a life that didn‘t contain him. )

written, gods...rising from where?, oneshot, hominotp

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sunev789 January 27 2009, 19:15:29 UTC

H'OMFG! YOU'RE FAST! MEGANSQUARED IS TOTALLY FASTER THEN THE SPEED OF LIGHTm FOR REALS. AKSKDLJGA;DJJAALKDHGA;SLKDJHFG I DON'T HATE YOU! SOBBING.
WHY MUST YOU MAKE ME FEEL SO SQUISHY ON THE INSIDE, EVEN AFTER BEING BEATEN UP? ONLY YOU CAN DO THAT. T____T
SOULFIGHTERS FIGHTING~

Yeah, problems with malexmale relationships can cause so much angst...it's nice to add in every once in while. XDD

I didn't know if I was gonna add that part too! DDD:
THANK GOD YOU LIKE IT. ♥

With prompt & pairing, anything for my MeganBoo. ♥

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sunev789 January 28 2009, 02:05:35 UTC

WELL IT IS TRUE. AND SOMETIMES, BEATINGS ARE NESSECARY. LOVELOVELOVE.

OK! Nice & emotional...
I'll try it out just for you, bbs. 8Db
But if it's alittle cliche, I apologize now. T___T

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chrisrenheb January 27 2009, 19:10:03 UTC

That was beautiful, painful and so heartfelt.
Just pure feeling.
Thaanks for sharing.

sunev789 January 27 2009, 19:18:32 UTC

Gah~ Thank you! BOWS.
I'm really glad you liked it. ^___^
♥

starof_earendil January 27 2009, 19:11:53 UTC

AHHHH, SPOT, I HAVE MATH CLASS IN TEN MINUTES. ;_;

sunev789 January 27 2009, 19:16:11 UTC

;~; DAMN.

starof_earendil January 27 2009, 19:17:43 UTC

I'm tempted to bring my laptop to class, but we have hand out notes, so it wouldn't work. But I will be back at 4 pm!

sunev789 January 27 2009, 19:19:02 UTC

Alright~ I wanna hear what you got to say. NERVOUS.

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beatinlove January 27 2009, 19:48:17 UTC

oh. my. god. i don't have words for this kind of awesomeness ;0; i love it. ♥

sunev789 January 27 2009, 21:46:30 UTC

GAH~ ♥
Thank you so much, bbs! BLUSHES.

mikkyboom January 27 2009, 19:48:55 UTC

OH MAN OH MAN OH MAN.

so pretty and heartbreaking~ like, god, you got changmin down EXACTLY as i always imagine him, strong and proud but vulnerable. and YUNHO. omg YUNHO<3. trying to be the tough leader but needing approval, omg<333.

AND THIS!

The first cry, the first real cry, happened too many days afterwards, raked sobs through you like that’s all you had left to do after the yelling and the throwing and had you curled up against Yoochun’s chest as he sang something he’d just written, combing fingers through your hair to ease the tears and swirling his finger tips on the left side of your back in some attempt to sooth your severed heart.

You weren’t supposed to break.

crying, sobbing, really oh man.

sunev789 January 27 2009, 21:48:44 UTC

AH~ I know, this is pretty close to the Changmin I envision in my head. Not so much Yunho, but kinda. XDDD

CLINGS. I love you.
You made me feel all squishy inside. *___*
♥

mikkyboom January 27 2009, 21:56:56 UTC

:DDDD -LOVE!-

i don't know, i always imagine yunho as a big bby. XD 'cause all the other members talk about how he acts all cute to them, so that image as always stuck for me, of yunho pretending to be big and bad, but really being a thing of fail and marshmellows. <3

sunev789 January 27 2009, 22:26:48 UTC

YES! I know, that's why I included the touching bit. Like he needs to know he's loved some way or another & then the kiss, he's constantly falling all over the place. He really is made of fail & clumsiness.
It's too cute to imagine big bad leader-sshi so squishable~ 8DDD ♥