[fic] VF drabble: A moment in Time

[sunflower1343]

VF Drabble: A Moment in Time
Pairing: Asami x Akihito
Rating: R

Note: I'm trying to put the finishing touches on a Feilong and Mikhail story, but I was out driving this afternoon and the glittery ice covered trees and blue skies brought this scene to mind, so I came home and wrote it down. I'll probably share it with the comm's later.

Comments

[mtarashidango]

*grins* I just got back from a nice long walk at the Nature park nearby too and this story is so perfect with this beautiful weather :)

It's nice to see Asami being honest with himself and thinking of Aki more ^^

And the last bit... awesome Akihito first. Always first. When what might have started off as desire for control and submission when they first met, turns to desire to give pleasure now. Just awesome ^___^

*hugs* Hope you enjoy the rest of a beautiful weekend! Thanks for indulging us with more Asami x Akihito love^^

[sunflower1343]

^__^ Walking in a Winter Wonderland.

I'm hoping this is where Asami is sometime in the next year. I hope he makes that leap. It's why I won't let this manga go.

*hugs you*

[ninnive]

That's so lovely! It captures the winter mood perfectly - and that's extra great, because we have a much too warm winter here this year...

[sunflower1343]

Thank you. *wishes some snow your way, just a little, to make it pretty* :)

[k_a_s_h_k_a]

mmm ^^ that was so sweet~
akihito`s behaviour just makes me love him more and more, he is like a sunshine, makes the world around him brighter ^^ even asami can`t resist it :]
hmm, even asami`s kinda sweet in this one ^^
lol, he`s just one of those guys - they can be totall bastards most of the time but when they do/say this one RIGHT thing we forgive them everything XD
much love for asami ^^

[sunflower1343]

LOL, you're right about Asami. I think Aki would forgive him anything if he just admitted he cared. Though I get the feeling that Asami is waiting for Akihito to admit it first. Much love for them. and *hugs* for you! ^___^

[photoash]

Very powerful writing. It was so vivid the descriptions even with a few amount of words being used. I liked how you ended it and the last line as others have said was very powerful - it did make me look at them differently!

thank you for sharing :)

[sunflower1343]

Thank you very much! It was a very visual story for me, so putting the descriptions down was easy with this one. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[heiligwasser]

>Matsuda, still believed that he was carrying out some secret meetings with the local crime families no matter how many times he denied it.< -->so funny
as for the rest: beautiful like always *grin*

[sunflower1343]

^__^ Thank you!