[fic] VF ficlet: Illusions

Aug 03, 2007 22:38

Title: Illusions
Character: Asami
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers/Warnings: none

Notes: This is one of those shorter, slightly introspective things I'm moved to write on occasion. I have another b-day fic for Asami almost finished, but this kind of jumped out just now. (with apologies to Oscar Wilde...)

Illusions )

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magickinoko August 4 2007, 07:56:11 UTC
I see signs of mid-life crisis. XD Let's hope he's not going for a career change and start a farm or something! XDD (When you mentioned painting, I thought it was going to be a case of Dorian Gray :P)

Love it, and thank you! :DD

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sunflower1343 August 4 2007, 08:58:12 UTC
Thanks! It was a case of Dorian Gray though. He just hadn't had the painting that long and was smart enough to give it up.

I thought about the mid-life crisis thing. I can't picture him driving and red sports car and making Aki his trophy wife. *runs*

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magickinoko August 4 2007, 09:18:41 UTC
LOL This is me totally missing your note at the top. XDD Well there you go, it IS meant to be a tad bit supernatural after all. :P

XDDDDDDD

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sunflower1343 August 4 2007, 13:30:39 UTC
Yes, it's meant to be magic realism, where magic can always happen for the sake of art LOL!

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chris_king_2005 August 4 2007, 08:13:06 UTC
Squee! Asami's mother and Oscar Wilde's infamous portrait, all in the same fic....

*laughing*

As always, it's *perfect*.

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sunflower1343 August 4 2007, 13:33:11 UTC
Thanks. :) I've pushed back my birthday smut a few days. After posting 3 fics in as many days I thought I should give people a little rest...

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karaq August 4 2007, 09:28:31 UTC
Amazing...as always. I loved the mother/son 'interaction', it was really well written. I think she'd love Akitho if she met him (and would have him dress up in a white wedding dress or something) XD

~KaraQ

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sunflower1343 August 4 2007, 13:37:08 UTC
Thank you.^^ I think she'd have ganged up with Akihito against her son.

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masqueer11 August 4 2007, 13:13:08 UTC
Oh, how I love this fanfic. Oscar Wilde + Viewfinder = Modern gothic romance. However, I hate Dorian Gray since he's naturally cruel but our Asami is way better than that. Hhhhmmmm, if Asami has a mother, I would picture as one of those high bred ladies; solemn but elegant.

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sunflower1343 August 4 2007, 13:39:56 UTC
Thank you. :) Yes Dorian really sucked. Asami had the smarts and guts to get rid of the picture though, so that right there makes him ten times smarter. And Dorian only wished he was a handsome as our Asami. XDD

If he has a mother...? XD I sometimes wonder too though.

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premerseahshiko August 4 2007, 14:12:41 UTC
Asami's Mom sounds a lot more caring and nurturing in this than in your therapy series. But love his little threat to her and the way she just disappeared :)

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sunflower1343 August 4 2007, 19:30:00 UTC
Yes, I made his mother a different character in this one. I never seem to write her the same way, just use her in the service of the story. ^^; I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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