[ficlet] Missing Pieces

Nov 21, 2007 21:23

Title: Missing Pieces
Pairing: Asami x Aki
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: up through NT
Warnings: none

Note: Takes place about June the year after HK. Just a little contemplative from Akihito's POV.

It's Mar-chan's birthday! YAY!!!!!!!!! Happy Birthday Mar-chan! This is just for you. *hugs*

Missing Pieces )

takaba, asami

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paranoia_woman November 22 2007, 03:01:26 UTC
You never disappoint and you always leave me wanting more. I feel like a hungry Oliver Twist at the orphanage during breakfast, "More please."
Thank you for sharing Mar-chan's present with everyone.

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:34:16 UTC
Thank you! :)

And LOL, sorry to smack you down Oliver, but no more gruel for you! Great, I'm a Dickens villain. XD I'll try to write more. I've just not had much time between YA things and RL. :(

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illusionwish November 22 2007, 03:12:07 UTC
Another wonderfully written piece. What a nice read for the start of the day, thank you.

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:29:17 UTC
Thank you, for this and all your other comments. That's what always ends up making me want to write more. :)

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sueona November 22 2007, 03:30:53 UTC
This is great. I love the story. More please. Great story. :D

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:28:33 UTC
Thank you. :) I'll try to write more, but I just have had very little time lately. :(

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sodiumion November 22 2007, 03:42:17 UTC
This came at a really good time!

Exams suck, and even more so when there's so much dreary material to read for it.

YOU TOTALLY MADE MY DAY! ♥

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:27:39 UTC
Awww, sorry you're in the middle of exams. Good luck with them! *hugs* And I glad this gave you a little break. :)

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sodiumion November 22 2007, 13:43:45 UTC
D: Exams suck. Here's to hoping that this will be the second last round of exams I'm going to take in engineering. D':

<3 I'm glad you wrote it! <3

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 14:24:24 UTC
And really, since you'll be getting a job before the last set, these are the last that matter. Boy did I blow off my final ones. XDD

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afterburn November 22 2007, 04:55:16 UTC
your work never fails to leave me in fangirl goo. always something to look forward to especially before thanksgiving ughghg. the idea of Asami changing is always a wonderful topic and I love it to pieces. *coughcough I should be writing losing it all*

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mrk33 November 22 2007, 05:16:53 UTC
If I were an emoticon I would be clapping. Pieces part two the trip. *winks*

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sunflower1343 November 22 2007, 11:24:50 UTC
Thank you. :) I don't know about a part 2 though. I just hate writing sequels. But I might. :)

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sodiumion November 22 2007, 14:33:50 UTC
OMG. Please do consider! <3

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