[fic] VF: Back Where He Belongs

[sunflower1343]

Title: Back Where He Belongs

Comments

[sakura27]

God, that was magnificent! I adore your fics. Your characters have so much depth, so much emotion. And the dialogs are brilliant.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!!!

[sunflower1343]

Thank you. :) I'm really glad you liked it.

[amilgoul]

Kyaaaaaaaa! So Lovey Dovey the both of them.Thanks for sharing.

[sunflower1343]

Thanks. I guess I figured they would be especially vulnerable after what they'd been through. I picture Akihito rebelling after he gets home, still Asami's lover, but not the least willing to dance to anyone's tune after being a slave. And Asami taking that as a challenge. ^^

[ultamatempa]

This is loooooove~ They've both gone through so much and now they can finally (somewhat) admit what they feel for each other. Your writing's always brilliant!

[sunflower1343]

Thanks! :) That's kind of how I saw it, that all they'd been through opened them up. I hope that happens a bit in the manga.

[twistedsheets10]

Asami barely heard the end of what Akihito said. "You're attracted to Feilong?" Dammit, he didn't mean to sound peevish.

"Aren't you?"

"No."

"But I thought..."

"You thought wrong."

"Oh. But he...."

"He's not my type."

"Are you telling me this whole mess is because Feilong isn't your type? Godammit, why didn't you just fuck him and show him?"

This entire conversation? Is made of WIN.

I love it. Oh yeah, violence wouldn't break Aki, but kindness and tenderness and the pain of others do. Aww. Asami, I hope you know how lucky you are.

[sunflower1343]

Thanks! ^__^ The thought of them having that conversation cracked me up LOL.

Yeah I've been looking at Akihito on the phone in NT15 and I see a guy who's still doing his damnedest to be brave and show that to Asami. I think if Asami shows him any tenderness after this Akihito will just crumble before it. I hope it happens.^^

[veggieg]

Sweet! I love the beautiful ending here. Just perfect.

[sunflower1343]

Thank you. :) I thought about making it longer, but I kept chopping off any extra parts I wrote. It felt like it said what I wanted as it was.