[fic] VF: Back Where He Belongs

May 14, 2008 20:00

Title: Back Where He Belongs ( Read more... )

takaba, romance, asami

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randrews25 May 15 2008, 00:52:15 UTC
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!
That's like totally
awesome.I love this!
I've always enjoyed
your fic.5 stars ^__^

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sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 03:33:12 UTC
Thank you very much. *hugs* :)

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kellyzat May 15 2008, 01:21:26 UTC
That was great. Thank you for sharing. I loved this part - He shot a started glance at his companion, whose eyes were closed, and whose face was the picture of innocence. He couldn't know...

So much tension in Asami and such a great resolution.

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sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 03:36:58 UTC
LOL oh no a typo! Thanks, because I could fix it really fast. XDD

To me a sign of their love will be that Akihito can read Asami when Asami thinks no one can. And it's part because Akihito gets to know him, but also part because Asami starts letting his mask slip around Akihito. So I like showing that. ^__^

Thank you. :)

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silver666 May 15 2008, 01:39:04 UTC
Cute (>.<)

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sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 03:37:15 UTC
Thanks! XD

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athenaartisan May 15 2008, 02:02:07 UTC
AHHH. That was so Beautiful. I cried. I hope the story takes that kind of turn. Thank you so much for sharing.

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sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 03:40:51 UTC
Thanks! Though I'm sorry you cried. This was supposed to be a happy fic. XDD

I hope they get some sweetness in the manga too. :)

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athenaartisan May 15 2008, 03:43:42 UTC
Those were happy tears. Love this fic.

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darkangeltrish May 15 2008, 02:02:24 UTC
The story and dialogs are magnificent..
Love it...Very emotional and yet sweet and romantic...
I love how the story ends...
And now they have each other understanding..
Awesome...Keep up the awesome works...*thumbs up*

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sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 03:42:02 UTC
Thank you. Understanding is what I want them to most have because love comes from that I think. :)

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