Comments | sunflower1343: [fic] VF: Back Where He Belongs

sunflower1343

[fic] VF: Back Where He Belongs

May 14, 2008 20:00

Title: Back Where He Belongs ( Read more... )

takaba, romance, asami

Comments 138

oakini May 15 2008, 02:22:37 UTC

So beautiful! Great job and thanks for sharing~

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 03:42:30 UTC

Thank you. :) (I almost didn't share it lol.)

gryffin_draco May 15 2008, 02:44:48 UTC

Have I mentioned yet how much I adore everything you write? Because if I haven't, shame on me, and if I have, it needs to be restated again. This was beautifully done, as per usual. I definitely think there are parts to this that will be coming out in Finder once Aki has been rescued. Asami is not getting back the boy that was taken from him, I can't wait to see how he deals with the new, more subservient one.

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 03:45:30 UTC

Thank you very much. I hope I don't let you down. ^^;

I think once Akihito gets home he might try to be even more independent than usual, just in rebelling against being held captive for so long. Asami might have his hands full. XD

But at first I think he's going to be very vulnerable. I hope Asami treats him well.

nerwen_elensar May 15 2008, 03:06:06 UTC

This was absolutely adorable! I love the way you write, it totally had me wrapped up. This was so precious and heartwarming and just...*sighs* ^o^ Thank you for sharing ^_^

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 03:46:23 UTC

Thanks! :) Sometimes I just need happy stories (even though it started dark ^^;).

natsurin May 15 2008, 03:13:47 UTC

Hehex... nice and sweet chapter.
The new chapter havent out yet right?
Asami only heard aki ask him to bring him back to Japan..
I'm so happy while reading htis fic.
Thanks for writing!

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 09:18:42 UTC

Thanks! No, the newest chapter isn't out. They come out on the 28th of even numbered months. :)

sakuradespair May 15 2008, 03:19:21 UTC

"Why would I be afraid of an old cripple? I can outrun you and your walker any day."

Haha, that is my absolute FAVORITE line from Aki-chan. Just imagining Asami with a walker sent me into a fit of giggles.

I really love the depth you put into those two, and how in character they stayed. There was a sufficient amount of awkwardness to keep it from making them seem too fluffy, yet the love was all there. Great job.

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 03:48:08 UTC

Thank you. ^__^

I had to let Akihito get a jab or two in. XD I'm glad you thought they were IC. I know I was pushing it, but I figured the circumstances were extraordinary.